Wonderful, wonderful, sad but wonderful. I really cannot wait to read more, please do not keep us in the dark for so long. Please, please Post Soon!

A first time reader is enthralled with you and your writing! You have a wonderful sense of character development, imagery, and flow. Will be looking forward to new installments!

Well, I was just going to read enough to get the gist of the story, then go to sleep. It's now 7 am. I just couldn't stop. And then to find it wasn't complete! ARRG!
I do hope you'll keep working on this. It is amazing.

niceja

Yay, he finally came to his senses. Very well written, as always. Hopefully things will go well for them...

Oh wow, Intense chapter! It was so well written, it caught the reader up in a whirlwind of emotion and action until the very end. Very well done. I'm glad Thom was there to rescue her, (if he wasn't I think I would have thrown something at my computer screen). Now I really cannot wait to read more, Please Post Soon!

You are still continuing, right? This story is much too good to abandon.

i loves it
the perfect fairy tale for it is twisted
without a happy ending thus far just more darkness
and puzzles
so such as life normally is
i can't wait to see what happens

your humble reader
Pixie .x

Please keep going with this. It's really really good and I want to know what happens next. I just want to be sure that there is going to be more because it kept me reading for four-ish hours straight.

I am completely intrigued by this story and hope very much that you plan on continuing. I'm glad that she finally realized that she loves Thom, now I just hope she can keep him. :)

uh oh... That's not good. Nope *shakes head*, that's not good at all.

Wow, a lot of stuff happened. Once again, I have to say: It's pretty sad how Catskin is so obsessed with Daryan. :( I still like Thomhas more, sorry... Once again: :(

Oh no! She gave him a clue... Uh oh, he might find her... That will be a disaster. :s

Wow, Ulga has changed a LOT o.0

Uh oh, the end was surprising! I can't tell if Thomhas knows who catskin is or not... Wow, it felt pretty weird reading this story with people calling her Relandrant...

Great chapter!

"she whispered one morning Sara says1 after the last snows had melted,"

Hm... You have another one of those "Sara says1" things, and I have no idea where it came from. Maybe you can explain it to me (if it was intentional)?

Wowzers! I wonder who the package was from! Very interesting there :)

Wow, Catskin is pretty sure that Daryan loves her, isn't she? It's especially weird after that meeting in the previous chapter: you'd think she'd realize that if he really loved her, he would've loved the girl in the kitchen (as in... Catskin) to. She's REALLY hopeful. I feel bad for her. :(

So... Livingston and Ser Thomhas are scheming... to find catskin, or someone else? I have a gut feeling that it's someone else, but all the story clues point to catskin. Maybe they're looking for catskin, but not because Ser Thomhas loves her, but because of other reasons. It's probably the latter... right?

Wow, I wonder how life at Ostler's is gonna be.

Great chapter!

Oh my! I can't think of a reason as to why Daryan was so... wretched to Kelry! The only thing I can think of, is her being ugly, and I always assumed she was at least pretty... Perhaps I'm wrong? And I guess I was right: I really don't Daryan. Normally I like guys with that big, huge flaw... Like, a bad temper, pompousness, etc. However, I think the reason I don't like him is because I'm sorta (not really, but kinda) a feminist.

Ah! There was no Livingston in this chapter! :( It was okay, though! :)

The beginning part of this scene (the part without Daryan) was very interesting. I don't quite understand Katy (though I'm more than sure that was intentional). Though, I'm guessing (and I think it was intentional for us to guess this as well) that Katy can't choose between Kelry of Lucia... because Kelry didn't really do anything wrong to her, but Lucia's her best friend?

Anyways, great chapter!