Reviews for Revenge on Reid

Reviews For: Revenge on Reid

My-Lover-Gren-Gren 2007-02-17 ch 6,	abuseOMG yeah! you totaly got to do a sequel!! goshness : ) i loved it : ) righto bye!
Soccer-Bitch 2006-11-01 ch 6,	abuseawesome story. i really enjoyed reading it.
saavik8 2006-09-29 ch 2,	abuseHey Great story I loved it please write a sequal
danielgirl 2006-08-06 ch 6, anon.	abuseHey, great story. I really like the character Reid. He is so cute. But anyway great plot, and good job with the characters. I think you got them right on the head. Keep writing, maybe even a sequel!
French Egg 2006-08-06 ch 1,	abuse'Kay. So. I stopped reading here: "Spencer Reid grinned at the girl sitting across the table from him. She was a brilliant girl, and probably the only person who could ever understand him and his mind completely. She had a mind comparable to his his, and to top it off, was really pretty, dark hair, dark eyes and pale skin. She glanced up from her dinner, noticing his eyes on her." Without even knowing your character's name, or personality, I already know she's violently Mary Sue. For the love of all things holy, don't describe your new character as beautiful /and/ brilliant in the first paragraph. Preferably, you should describe them as neither, and let the reader come to know said facts as the story progresses through the dialogue of the characters, etc. If I'm correct, your character will be an extremely young genius with multiple PhD's. She'll be in the BAU, dating Reid, and good friends with everyone else. She'll alsohave a tragic past that she hides until /exactly/ the right moment in a case that hits too close to home. Her past will haunt her and she'll be drawn into a deep abyss of horror, only to be pulled out by Reid. Correct?
imajazzbandnerd 2006-07-20 ch 2,	abuseOMG! This story is AWESOME! I love Christina! She sounds just like Lydia in my story. I just started this, but believe me, I have all day and I'm going to read like the whole series!
raven2547 2006-05-17 ch 6, anon.	abuseu no who i am i liked this a LOT i wuold enjoy it if u made a sequal!
Zephyrs 2006-04-12 ch 6,	abuseYou have converted me. I am now a loyal Criminal Minds fan. Reid is my fav character and this story made me smile. :)
JacobedRose 2006-03-07 ch 6,	abuseNice job, it's great! Nice story and characters.
coldfiredragon 2006-03-07 ch 6,	abuseGreat story. I love this show and I love Reid's character. Seeing him with a nice girl is a treat. Keep up the great writing. Can't wait for a sequel.
Manhattan SVU 2006-03-01 ch 6,	abuseSequel, Sequel, Sequel! You have to make a sequel to this story. You are a pheomenal writer and you really should keep it up! I really liked all aspects of this story and I think it's great that you gave Reid a girlfriend. Please make a sequel.
Jillie chan 2006-02-27 ch 6,	abuseThis is a great story and you would have gotten way more reviews if you had streeched the story out a bit insteed of posting it all at once. See you soon.
Pipotchi 2006-02-27 ch 6,	abuseYou can't do a sequel, you NEED to do a sequel! Seriously I'd love to see more, this was great =D I actually thought up a simular story (I tend to think of alot of stories and never post them) though I didn't have the kidnapping, I just had "Reid has a GF and no one knows" type story =)
hotchner 2006-02-27 ch 6,	abuseI WOULD REALLY LIKE TO SEE YOU TO WRITE A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY! THIS IS A GREAT STORY! I like the way you wrote Spencer in with a GirlFriend. I really like how you used Aaron Hotchner in the story also. I would like to have him used in the Sequel also. I AM A GREAT AARON HOTCHNER FAN (THOMAS GIBSON). KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WRITING! CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEL! YOU HAVE A GREAT THING GOING!

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