that was really sweet and cute ^_^

That was very good, prey continue your efforts.

this story was touching! I wuved it! It was CUTE!

aw, so sweet, kinda fluffy, yay, nuclear apple crumpets with martian marshmellows on top of it and a pickle...SORRY, my doctor ahs me on morphine so, this is the morphine talking...er...typing

That was a really cute little Yumi and Hiroki story and slight Yumi/Ulrich!

Oh my God, this was so cute! The Japanese was such a nice touch, and Hiroki was described so great. Well, so were the others too, I really liked this!

lol... this was a very beautiful story... and i really like the meaning behind it... and the Japanese part was really refreshing... i'm taking Japanese myself and i'm glad to know i understood most of what was said... exams are coming up and this was a great way to study! lol.

No. Fair. I can speak Japanese, but not that well! Meanie. (Anime pout)

Totemo kawaii! There's nothing better than the bond between an ane and her ototo.

AWW that was SO CUTE and I love it and I adore it and I hope you write more cute little oneshots :D

Oh it was SO cute, I just had to review and be all gushygushy and mushy and AWW and etc.

Oh I think I love you.
You captured the personalities so well, and Yumi was so flowing, and her little brother was SO REAL (he is just like mine, but I'm not NEARLY as nice as Yumi). I just wish you could have continued on... And added a little bit more Yumi and Ulrich convo after she's done reading you know?

But oh whelps, great job, and I can't wait to read more of your stories :D

w3ow...that was very intiresting. I cant help but wonder if the french voice over actress for yumi is a good singer or not. very nicely wrighten, I engoyed reading it alot, keep up the good work, and since I have a little brother, I have to say that was a farily acurate portrail of how I act around my brother. you love um, and you hate um all at one time.

That's so sweet!

Lol I was thinking about her voice but thanks for clearing that up. Great story, that was really cute. Not like the fluffy cute or romance even...I mean it was romance but it was really nice. Great fic!

lyokolady

I love Yumi and Hiroki stories... But this one is DEFINTAELY one of my faves.

Great story! Really sweet. Yumi's Italian voice actress is a terrible singer too!

aren't japanese songs just to die for? an odd way to use the term, but aren't they? xD there's a Pokemon song I always liked called 'Pichu Pichu burazzazu' or something similar.

I love fics like these that just have the characters...watching things. ^^

*wanders off* 'Hajimete darakeno bokura...'