Well, that is disappointing that you've quit but understandable when there aren't many readers.

Your fiction is great, died when Sam cry that is fine, handsome, but now you've written this fantastic fiction wow! updated soon, no evenings!

Looking forward to the next part

Very good, though I wish it was longer. And you're right! He was much too hot to die. My dad yelled at me for yelling at the screen when he died. But come on! He was one of my favorite characters! Along with Jacob ('cause of his awesome personality), Jesse when he was young (a little 'cause of his personality, mostly 'cause I felt sorry for him. He was so young...), and Charlie ('cause of his personality AND hotness!!) Keep writing!!

You are right when you say that Sam did not deserve to die like the way he did. I actually liked Sam, he was not the same as his grandfather, father or brother...he was different.
Being almost 20 now, life taught me that people who are different always die as first despite the good things that they could've done if they only had the chance.
The words you choose were good, tough I wished there was a little bit more drama in it. But maybe that is just my problem and not yours because I'm such a dramaqueen and live for my drama fics :-)
You've done a great job, I enjoyed reading the fic it was such a long time ago that I read an english fic and wrote an english review. Because of your fic I really wanna read more fics, so thank you for that.

I'm truly sorry for my bad english, but I'm sure you'll get my point.

Keep writing!

LE

Yay! A new Taken fic! And I agree Sam was too hot and young to die! I hope you update soon! I can't wait to see how this turns out.