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| shivani 2007-05-14 ch 18, anon. | abusebravo...beautifully written |
| kiwi6226 2006-10-17 ch 18,  | abuseGreat Story roxy |
| Sakura Mars 2006-09-15 ch 18, | abusePoor Nigel! U r evil, u know! But they ended up together, it´s great. Well, great story too! |
| LindafromItaly 2006-09-03 ch 18, | abuseit's a great story, very great...you write very well, it's a pleasure read all your storyes. thanks |
| RosesBud 2006-08-29 ch 18, | abuseAw - the whole thing was great and the last chapter awesome. loved the last 2 lines! |
| Tashe Dangerous Eyes 2006-08-21 ch 18, anon. | abuseI loved this story. You came up with such an interesting idea and developed it beautifully. So many details and entertaining things. Very well done. I love the dialogues between everybody and the fluidity of the story as well. I don't usually like drama much but I loved it here. You have a great grasp for the characters and I could easily hear their voices while reading. Congrats in a job well done. Now, if you allow me a suggestion...When transitioning the story from scene to scene you within the same chapter you should separate the chapters using a line or an asterisc to indicate that some time has passed because by the time the reader realizes their reading a different scene they have to go back to give a mental closure and start again with the next thus loosing the flow of reading. All in all this was fantastic. Please keep writing. You are excellent. |
| Mrs. Willy Wonka 2006-07-13 ch 18, anon. | abuseThat was the most fantastic and amazing Relic Hunter story I've read!! I loved all your fics! |
| Trinitystargazer3 2006-06-28 ch 18, | abuseThat was great. Poor Nigel has no idea how good looking he is. I loved the whole story. :) |
| Space-Case7029 2006-06-26 ch 18, | abuseAnother great story. Loved it. Audra |
| Tanya Reed 2006-06-26 ch 18, | abuseI really like how you ended this. The arrival of Preston was surprising and an interesting turn of events. The best part was the reveal. Very well done. I can't help but wonder what a chance student looking up might think. :) |
| Sunflower18 2006-06-26 ch 18, | abuseYay! Have I told you I love you? ( just kidding my dear). I got the ending I always love. This chapter had the fluff and all the other wonderful stuff I needed. It hasnt been a good couple of days, and this cheered me up for now.. One thing though:“There’s no call to be mean,” Nigel protested. That sounded a little weird to me.. I really enjoyed this story. It was different from your others, making it really good.. Good job darling |
| Sunflower18 2006-06-26 ch 17, | abuseWhy are you saying sorry for a long chapter? I have read longer chapters than this. This is a good size one, dont say sorry. |
| Space-Case7029 2006-06-20 ch 16, | abuseGreat chapters. The start of a new sibling relationship. The beginning of a new extended family? Love it and look forward to more. Audra |
| Sunflower18 2006-06-19 ch 16, | abuseCan I hope this story is going towards the syd/higel romance we all love?:P ( You dont have to answer). I can wish though cant I?:P |
| Tanya Reed 2006-06-18 ch 16, | abuseOh, I liked this part! It was great to see Nigel with Rose, and I really liked the part with Rose and Syd at the end. |