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No matter how many times I reread this story, it always makes an impact on me.
"She remembered it too well."
I love Chinese food.

Can I make this into a story? Because this is really well done and I want to see if I can make anything with it (i'll give you credit, don't worry)

That was interesting

Have I mentioned how much I adore your stories? Already I'm feeling for Tenten. You give her so much depth, I'm impressed.

Aww... This was so beautiful and heartwrenching at the same time. Fantastic job.

poor tenten. shes a great person really. really good fic. honestly with you i dont have anything to criticise. i just get deeply engrossed with your fics

Poor Tenten. She has a completely different life now than she did then, doesn't she?

so sad!but i cant help but like it

That was really good. :)

the last three lines are the ones that are my favorite. even if i love the whole story in general! i also like the verse at the bottem. thanks for posting!

Cyclone

Oh god, I love this piece! Poor kid, the ending was just great.

I'm not really a huge Tenten fan, but I've started to read your writings and I'm actually finding myself really enjoying her more.

lonesome. and a nice "politically correct" use of Lunar New Year. many conflicts- some say Chinese, others say Vietnamese... *sigh* how lame. LOL - it's Lunar, and we'll leave it at that.

Cute oneshot! :D

wow, im hingry now! lol that was good!