good story... I like the way you ended it...

you can blame Tim Eldred for me finding your story he has a link to it on the site

You really know how to leave a reader hangin' don't you? Good job! I'm glad that Commander Ferguson got to the twins before it was too late; but I'm even sorrier that Colleen and Sandor couldn't make another go of their relationship. Both dedicated to duty, putting aside their own desires for the sake of the greater good. The stuff heroes are made of. Still I wonder with your ending are you planning any more additions to this story? It would be worth the wait if you would. Excellent job.

GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) sad to see this story ending.

In the English language version of Starblazers, the ship is called Argo not Yamato.

I see they have finally decided to attack the Cometine base, based on their observations and Trelaina's request. However, I think they had better listen to Nova's intuition and keep both eyes open as they board and attack the base.

Well, I see that Kat and Colleen have plans for that enemy base and that Nova is to be used as "bait" to distract Wildstar. Also, Derek (as in the show and in my own fics) is true to character-being incredibly dense as to why Nova is happy (her feelings for him) and thinking it's all because of her friends. This should turn out to be rather interesting. Also, it seems "stuck" at Chapter Ten...when are you doing more?

The byplay between Sandor and Colleen is VERY interesting. And what sort of scheme did Kat and Nova get involved in that almost got Kat thrown out of school?(If I read that right...)

This story is VERY interesting, to say the least.

Glad that everybody got out alright with the exception of the robot that needs to be repaired. You portray the twins with such intelligence and ingenuity-standout characteristics of what makes great heroines. I liked Sandor's line,"You better have made it out," obviously reflecting an even deeper meaning with regards of his feelings for Colleen. Great work!

So far, I like the crew's reaction to Kathleen and Colleen-likled the scenes with Knox, IQ-9 and Nova. Interesting story how the twins found themselves marrooned-it seems that Colleen and Sandor have some past history together? Very interesting.

Well, there's a good reason why Nova was so happy when Kathleen and Coleen showed up--old Academy roommates, hmmh? Nice thought, and it'll be interesting to see what happens now that Nova has some female partners in crime on the Yamato.

Nicely done chapter; liked the atmosphere of mystery on the abandoned ship with Wildstar and Conroy; it is an interesting mystery to see what Nova is so happy about. BTW, you describe Nova as a brunette in your story; no real gripe there, since her hair color seems to be hard to pin down in the show; sometimes she seems to be a brunette, sometimes a redhead (in series 1) but from series 2 onwards, her hair seems to be different shades of honey/ash/dark blonde fairly consistently. You may want to address her hard-to-pin-down hair color in subsequent stories...and from you, I hope there are many subsequent stories.

GREAT CHAPTER! (*x3) I hope they survive too.

You're a wonderful sci-fi writer! I didn't see the explosion coming considering the steps the crew took to maintain their level of safety; what a great way to leave the readers wanting more! Loved the humorous takes thrown in, makes the characters seem so real. The Sandor and Colleen fluff at the beginning of the chapter was good, it's always nice to throw in a little romance. The story is taking a pivotal turn-keep'em coming!

The plot truly begins to thicken here. Kat, in my opinion, is a little too eager to for this mission to take place. Hopefully my suspicions about her are just that, suspicions. Though I see another love relationship beginning to blossom once more between Sandor and Colleen. Romance thrown into the mix never hurt anything. Nova's intuitiveness is not going unnoticed by Derek, and I like that he's paying attention to her. Again your descriptives made this chapter flow nicely. Dialogue was thorough and on point. Fantastic work!

You know, there is something decidedly Heinlen-esque about these two.
Or very Dirty Pair-ish.
Except I've always thought there was some Heinlen-esque about Kei and Yuri, too.
Fun chapter!