Reviews for The Aftermath of Armeddon

PartayyyyLikeARockstarr 2006-04-09 ch 1,	abuselook no offense or anything but that wood never happen i mean AJ was really really upset when Harry sent him back up into the ship so he would die instead great story anyway though
Viandra 2006-02-28 ch 1,	abuseO_o O...kay... I'm gonna have to go with LLA on this one...
Lady Affleck 2006-02-27 ch 1,	abuseWell, it was an interesting story line, but it moved way too fast. Not enough detail...not enough diolague. It sould've been very good. It just needed more 'meat' to it. It reminded me more of an outline of a story. Also, a few things were wrong in the story. One of them being the wedding happen right after he returned and not monthes afterward, and they actually had married. (You could've changed the ending...I was only reminding you.) Other than that the story line was okay, and some of your wording was good. I just never would've guessed A.J. could be so hot and so evil.