wow i really love your story ^^
the plot, style and everything is simple great
i look foreward to the next chapter

*appluades* Awesome fic thus far, and (though it may make no difference to you what I think) I highly enjoyed your details earlier on. I didn't feel the impaired the plot at all...and it just did even more for the imagery :3 Anywhay, I hope you decide to continue the fic~ I

I love yourstory so far and can't wait for the next chapter X3. It say that you last updated Nov 04/08. Dude! It's now Jan 20/09, *winny vocie* when is the next chapter coming out, danm it *pout*. Sorry for the crusing, but it's want I mean. Hope to read the next chapter soon and looking foward to reading more of stories XD
Bye for now XD

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HEY i am so pleased you are carrying on with this, i think you have the pacing really well thought out.
I feel a bit silly for reviewing now, since i've not done so since...like chapter 6 or something? But seriously, keep it up dude! :D

Man I cant wait for the next chapter. This story is one of the best stories I've ever read.

have that same detail prob. w/ writing, but your doing awesome. I feel bad for Ryou having to go to that party though. maybe the wall paper will let him join it? lol
anywho, great job. Kudos
-s.o

Gah! I MUST have more Marik x Malik ness! XD great chapter as usually, please update faster! =D

GEE WILIKERS BATMAN X3
i love this story!
what took you so long?!?

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Yay! updated finally, not that I can talk much though ^^;, anyhow, this chapter moved along quite well, it didn't seem to move too slowly (unlike some of the other chapters) and was a good read, so top marks for that^^
Update soon please, can't wait to find out what happens! 8D
Me no likey cliff-hangers D8<
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- Child Of The Red Moons.
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Oh, were to review! The dilemma.

I'm stoked! An update, and a good one. I did notice the change in style a bit with the way the characters acted and the detail into their personal point of views vs what all else see.

Oh, poor Ry. I know Baku is glaring, tell me the other isn't Marik already. lol I wonder if he will demand Malik be there as well; probably. lol

The poor guys are still so sore and just scabbing their wounds. They shouldn't even be up and around.

I laughed aloud just realizing that Baku summoned them as if summoning his wife and son to the table. lol Poor Ry, run!
Malik is catching on to what Baku will do to Ry,I wonder if he has ever taken a look at himself. He's really very very pretty as well.

It won't be long before someone notices, including Ryou. I wouldn't be shocked at all if each of the other vampires notices the brother's servants looks despite the disdain for the other's servants personalities. ew.. sneak out now!! run.. lol

I love this fic. Don't feel badly about updating, I am seriously lagging as well. It's a nasty semester.

I love this story so much! Please keep up the good work!

you are SO over due for an update =P

seriously. this story kicks major **. You should update it =3

Great chapter. Update soon

I love it
please continue the story!
XD

Wow, so this has been sitting in my inbox for like, nearly a month now! Does that mean that the next chapter's almost up!? I hope so! It wasn't a bad cha[ter, even for not much happening, but if more is supposed to happen in the next, then I can't wait!! Update soon!!
~Grace