wow. just wow. I can't even describe how good that was. Just utterly and compleatly amazing. And the last line, wow, just, wow. wow.

HEHEH! I* LOVE THAT! It was amazing! ur an amazing writer ^-^

I think I read this before, quite awhile ago actually, and I just found it again
So, I'm reviewing this time! XD

It's a short story which could easily be done wrong, but you made it right. Except one thing.
It's "Carburettor", with two T's
Lol, I know that's probably me being petty, but I noticed it when I was reading it
That's what I get for being a Mechanics student I guess

Are all your stories written with the intention of making unsuspecting readers sob their eyes out?

(Is that even a regular reaction?)

Beautiful work, that was.

this is so damn good~! boo. the ending killed me. pfft. nice one.

I loved it! can't wait for the next chapter!

Gippal's ignorance is so frustrating "D. I really liked the story though, very nice!

I know that I've reviewed your stories eight million times already, but I can't help it! They are so good! Especially this one, but I was sorta confused at the beginning because I thought you were talking about Tidus because of the Zanarkand Abes team. Besides that one flaw, Everything was extremely good!

I love all of your stories.

Just found this story and loved it!
That Gippal really needs a kick up the backside!

If this is what you can do on a bad day ...

I loved the way the words flowed through my mind, and would love to read more like this from you

Oh, my goodness..I really loved this freaken story...Its great, its brillant, its awesome, its great, its, its, its prefect!

Oh, how sad. Sorry it came as a result of your bad day, but I do think it's great! I like the almost poetic repition of "and he didn't know what it did to her". You write teriffic RikkuxGippal fanfics, girl!

Wow...I'm sorry to say this but.. you really need to have bad days more often! Only if you write fanfics and they come out like this though. This was a very good oneshot!e You never cease to amaze me!!

I suppose I'm a weirdo for liking the angst too...

Aww, how adorable. The descriptions that I've come to be accustomed to from you are right on the mark once more. The only negative I can say about this is that you used "and" a lot...I count 12 times to begin a new paragraph alone...but I'm super anal about things like that. It isn't a big deal...its just me.

I'm not entirely sure if this is a oneshot or a multi-chaptered fic, but I'd love it if it was the latter ^.^

Keep up the stellar work!