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| Solarstone 2007-10-21 ch 1,  | abuseWomen sometimes do crazy things, even to the ones they supposedly care for. Like Ron, I can't seem to comprehend why KP's running from their relationship. The vagueness only makes this more depressing. Good stuff. |
| bigherb81 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abuseNice story a little sad but still shows that he has the strength to move on after something like that. I also see your sticking w/ the more open ended closers to your stories nice. |
| Omegon 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseYeah, what Cowboy said. You better do a follow up man! |
| laura1990 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abusehi my name is Laura... i want to be honest with you. i like it, but you made the story so short and boring at the end, and you made Kim Possible the bad guy at the story... thanks cya Laura Rogers |
| RI100014 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseSeriously dude you need to explain some backstory to this tale of betrayel! I understand that long distance relationships are hard but come on! One year? And he's been there for her for how long, and she drops him like a sack of used condoms. And what does Monk...Mankey have to do with all this? All I'm feeling right now is a lot of pity for Ron, a lot of hate toward little miss ungrafeful and alot of confusion toward why she dumped the best thing that ever happened to her... Till next time...adios. |
| AtomicFire 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseTo me it doesn't matter how Kim and Ron ended things or if Mankey is a part of the reason. The real focus of this tale is Ron and how he deals with Kim and how she left. To be told that you are loved by someone and have them walk away for another is a hard thing to have happen, it does happen and what Ron feels is completely valid and real. Thanks for the great read! |
| ASpHIL 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abuseI wuldnt be surprised if u are ron, the emptopn is too accurate; nice. any chance of sequal. |
| spectre666 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abuseA storm and fury, signifying nothing. You use a great deal of emotional verebiage, but why is Kim leaving? Is Mankey in the Army? Did Ron do something? Did Kim do something? What is this about? |
| Akira Stridder 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abusesorta nice! |
| Classic Cowboy 2006-02-27 ch 1, | abusepowerful fic bro, you better do a followup! |