Aw, this story was so sad it made me cry. You are an amazing writer.

L.S.

OMG! You totally made me cry! I simply love it! It was so sad! Verry good, but very sad. I'm impressed my little sis! But don't ever make my cry in your stories over him dying okay? Or anyone important!! I mean it!! lol!! good job dearest!

Aw ... you made me cry! And I've to say that I'm not usually that easy to get to cry. It was beautiful. You really brought all the emotions to the fore front. I loved it! Keep up the good work. ciao

Omg. That was such a sad story. Tears are falling from my eyes. While I was reading I was listing to teardrops are falling for the last part of the story which choked me up some more. Omg I loved it. And I'm still really teary.

A very powerful story, the witing was perfect in every way. I love the fact that you made it so that Captain Jack Sparrow never dies. I loved it, keep up on the writing.

Aw! I can't see too well, i have too many tear in my eyes...not the best day to wear eyeliner...
it was fantastic!!
sob
x

Aw! That was so sad! I'm on the verge of crying! Nice work, Anna. Very nicely done. Dang it! I don't wanna cry! *lol* Keep up the good work!

Anna, do you have some kind of cruel obsession with making people cry? I have the flu, can't do anything worth mentioning (beyond reading fanfiction/fictionpress) and you have to write a story about Jack dying? *sniff* You aren't supposed to kill Jack! It's a PotC no-no! In the manual "Rules About Writing PotC FanFiction" rule #1 is: You Can't Kill Jack. Obviously you just weren't paying attention. It was very good, but VERY sad. You better not kill Jack in the Unicorn. I'll hurt you. A lot. He can't die again! It just wouldn't be fair. Reading about him dying once is enough. Twice would be even more depressing. *Sniff* Well...I've got to go and have a nap. Not really, but as long as my mom thinks I'm resting. All is well.

Chloee Phantom

Well, you got me crying! And I mean...REALLY crying! That was beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. I think you have real courage to write something like that...gods I don't think I ever could. I could maybe kill my OC (not saying I ever would...or would I? LOL) but I couldn't kill Jack. It was a wonderful read!

:) xoxox Goodluck with future stories!! I'll be reading! :) (hope that didn't sound strange and creepy)

It's horrible and yet wonderful at the same time! I'm still crying from it! DON'T EVER WRITE THINGS LIKE THAT AGAIN! Not smart to read that kind of thing when I'm on my problem...lol