cool fic!
is there more?

That was great, but I don't think you should use the word guys, it's too modern, other than that it was really well writen
thanks

ITS NOT HORRIBLE! its gorgeous. short and sweet, loved it. very original idea, with hints of fluff. well done! :)

this is good, but a bit amateur-ish compared to your most recent works. now I know what you meant when you told me not to read your older works because you were embarassed! it isn't bad, though, I actually thought it was pretty cute. good job :)

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i dont get it.

Love it - very sweet!

guys must deal with the forever smartness of women. whether they want to or not! smiles. good job!

That was so cute! I really wish they had gotten married in the books...

OMG! that was so cute...KEL/DOM ALL THE WAY! *grins*

oh la la. that was interesting. i have done that with my cruch too. he is so hot.

I like it. You have good grammer and you write in proper sentences. That's always a good thing.

While it may be a little simple for a prologue, you could very easily build off of it. It's cute!

Cute!

um... well, it's good writing, but i had hoped the situation would be a little more awkward, which would make it funny [contrary to popular belief, mine is not a sympathetic nature, so i laugh evilly at others displeasure]

perhaps a longer fic?

And I'm glag you couldn't help but write it! That's not nonsense, it's so sweet!

well if you want me to be frank, it would be meaningless if you left it as a one-shot...you should really continue it, it's a great prologue for a fic...love your writing...and love the in-characterness. and dom's such a sweetheart *sigh* makes me wish i'd leave the kel/neal fandom *ugh eww no! kel/neal rock!...dom's just a subsitute:P* yes, i am not sane.