THAT'S IT? I want more! >.<
This was such a wonderful story and I thoroughly enjoyed it, but I feel like it's lacking something (a few filler chapters or more character development chapters, maybe?). Eh, oh well. ;D

On a whole it was probably one of the best KaiJou fics that I have ever read. Good job! You are a wonderfully skilled writer.

Oh man! This is a wonderful opening chapter for part 2! :D
And I like the "messiness" of it. Works really well.

So end of Part 1, all I can say is "woah." And that's a good, impressed "woah."

What an interesting web we weave...

Oh man, INTERESTING! :D

When I was poking around for more KaiJou fics someone recommended this fic to me, but didn't tell me what it about. But once I read the summary I thought that it was such a fun idea that I had to read it!

You are a wonderful writer! On to the next chapter for me.

Oh wow. That was just, wow.

Perfect everything! The characters, the plot, the details!

It was like, no, it was, the perfect story. I've searched hours to find something decent, and I stumble onto this amazing story.

Total Kudos to you =D *glomps*

I love it. Your writing list has been a gold-mine for SxJ fics, and this one is a long one without ever really falling out of character. I love how they're never really completely happy, the odd situation that threw them together in the first place, that Jou has problems stemming from his dad, and Mokuba's lovely older independence. He was a charmingly intelligent character in this story. The ending, where Kaiba plays the scary corporate tone, was a joy to find out the truth. :) Gracias!

I know I read this, and I was quite impressed after finishing it all, but... I blocked a majority of the story from my memory. Why? Cuz it was fucking /tragic/. The story was damned painful up until part 2, but even then there was little release. GAH!

However, I did enjoy it. Twas a well-written, realistic angst fic. And though the plot had been used before, I thought it was interesting that you didn't take a humorous or romantic road. The last chapter (the only one I remember considering it's as close to happy as you can get) was an appropriate and logical end to such a fic that still managed to do my KaiJou loving heart some good.

All in all, I want to have your babies. :3

hm...this is a new and really unique take on kaiba's and jou's relationship
i kinda like how you made love out to as complicated as it probably is (not that i'd know)
also kaiba was an asshole which is totally fine lol

hey, hey! another good story of yours! i totally love your stories of Seto/Joey! BTW, my penname was SetoKaibaWheeler before. In case you haven't known! Anywho, I'll read the rest later. good job!

:D

I like it so far.

Will read more later. I'm tired. *yawn*

~Skipper~

Hmm. This is indeed very good...you've certainly done well on your research.

It seems very realistic...and leaning on the Angsty side, actually...but I do like it. It's interesting. It's...different. I've never really read anything like it - the majority of fics being random fluff everywhere, or extremely depressing things. Yet, this story seems to reach a nice median. A neutral zone, if you will.

It's really left me in awe...

As a fellow writer I salute you. You've got talent, so keep writing until your hands fall off.

i'm so glad i came across this fic.
your writing is flawless.
the style, the choice of words, the character analysis-
oh god, they were all too good.
your writing inspires me,
a definite charm.
a definite favorite.

Great fic!! I love how you wrote their characters, althought I still hope that they love eachother at least a bit ;D