AAH! I searched RogerMark and found your stories and AAH! I read the first and most of the second and im only reviewing now so i feel kinda guilty, but i was so entranced, i couldnt stop myself. Im sorry i didnt catch this when it started. I cant wait for the last chapter. Im like on the edge of my desk chair. You manage to pack a lot into short chapters, I worship your skill. Can't wait for the last chappie!

You say there's only one more chapter... Update, update! You're almost done. You can do it! =)

UPDATE NOW!...?

no there cant only be one more chapter!! im gonna go in a deep depression now!!

Update please! This story is awesome!

ZOMG uPDAtezorz PLEASEE!

gah LOVE!

i like this story. i really, really do.

aww...whatever. i can have mark if he doesn't want roger

i dont get the paying part. pls pm me and explain.

yes, short. but meaningful.
by the way... OMG you called mark COHEN! damn, i'm the only one who can call him that! love!
The OC fans get it.

Aww, I loved this last chapter! Please update soon!
Regards,
K.Elessar

Ok, I know that this review may seem sort of like a flame, but it was meant to be constructive criticism. This was intended only to help you grow as a writer. I apologize in advance for any remarks that cause any discomfort or unhappiness - I was only trying to write the kind of review that I like to recieve. First of all, I think that a beta could really help to make your writing seem more professional. You seem to be missing words from several sentences and a decent beta could help you with a few grammar issues, not to mention helping your chapters keep focus. Second, as you've mentioned, the chapters are very short. This is sort of a preference thing, but I think that it is very difficult to get across a point or truely express (or resolve, for that matter) a conflict in so few words. I have one more little thing that I would like to mention: the characters seem to be a bit one-dimensional. Roger is an angsty musician that is in love with Mark. Period. There isn't anything else to his character. Nothing is really explained ever; there is no background for his motives or, really, any inner monologue that displays what he is thinking. Ditto for Mark: he performs his stereotypical activities and whines about why Roger isn't there for him. I understand that he comes across as somewhat insecure, but he is a truely strong character that has his own issues that don't revolve around Roger. He has so much depth, and I hate to see that ignored. I know how easy it is to fall into the cliched "mark is weak because he's physically small so he must rely on big, strong, badass Roger for everything - if only Roger would stop angsting and love Mark" stereotype, but it is a shame when an author ignores all of the shading and nuances of each of the characters for a convenient plot device.
Again, I would like to apologize to you in the fullest if any of my comments/suggestions hurt you in any way. I only said the things that I did to help make you into a better writer. Feel free to ignore what I said, after all, its not me writing. I can only hope to see the final chapter coming soon.
Sincerely,
Mel

Only one more!? *sigh* Aw. Well I love them together. They make me SO happy. Mark and Roger always make me amazingly happy. AMAZINGLY. And I love this story. ^_^

Only one chapter to go? Aww! I like this story.
~Ashley~

I really enjoy this. Both this one and the first one. I really love how this is going and the emotions you bring out are fun. And they're so cute together.

*grins*

Please hurry up with the next chapter!

aw hahaha
that was awesome
especially the last 3 paragraphs
love love
::tosses love::