Kudos on the writing, no grammatical errors and the spelling, superb.

Because I don't like SasuSaku, (at all) I didn't find the ending plausible. Sasuke is bent on revenge. Sasuke never gets agitated by girls. It would have been more interesting, if he...retaliated? (is what i feel)

Anyhow, I must admit, that you made me hold my breath when Sasuke opened the paper, and that in itself is a praise. :) Once again, kudos.

AW! How adorable! Very cute. Don't stop writing!

God, the fluff. It was so cute I could squeal all day.

oh my gosh.that's so adorable AND SO CUTE! ^^
I LOVED ITR SO MUCH *thumps up*
F.A.V

I loved it, very good. My heart stopped when I read that Sasuke looked at the page. The end caught my soul when I realized that Sasuke wrote that on his OWN notebook.

Can U finish it? I wanna know what happens! It's a really good beginning!

Amazing

aw...the ending was so sweet.

-raised eyebrow- Well, now that IS interesting... ^^ So, does that mean Sasuke feels the same about Sakura? Nice fic, ja! =^^=

NGGAW SO CUTE ! XD squeal material !

i love the ending! so swet!!

Aw...That was too sweet for words.

this is awesome!
the ending is like...AWESOME TOO!
write more!!

aw! so cute! Ino-pig-erm Ino-san is so cruel though! Sasuke-san and Sakura-chan for life! (If I add -kun I'm afraid Sakura-chan would come to kill me...)

OMG!! LOVE IT :L!
especially the end! =D