Brilliant story,very imaginative and original!
Very sad but brilliant at the same time!
Hope you get the next chater up soon!

What an amazing story, I love it, it's like one of those old legends that you can't forget.
And it's been laying in the dark over here.

Hey this is great, keep going!

I have no clue why this amazing and epic origin of Bowser has only gotten 3 reviews! It's an outstanding read! Your writing style is easy and fun to read, but still as detailed, interesting, and captivating as thousands of other stories on this site.

I love reading Bowser origin stories, and yours ranks high on my favorites list.

(Hey, speaking of which, why not check out MY Bowser origin trilogy, which is in my info!)

I've got a feeling that quite a few toadstools will be dead before bowser gets the title king and feared tyrant over the koopas and eternal enemy of the toadstools. So far so great keep it up!

Simply amazing.

Update, so good, do it. NOW!