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IManageMyMischief
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
gorgeous. i never would have imagined that caleb would feel that deeply for will. it was very easy to relate to, because who hasn't felt that way? great, i loved it
Darev
2008-03-28 . chapter 1
I say it all the time...Caleb and Will make a much better couple. If anything, I believe Matt is more up Cornelia's alley. I've felt invisible now and then. Honeslty, I prefer being invisible most of the time. Attention is overrated.

Knight
soul sucking bird of darkness
2007-06-21 . chapter 1
i like it but i would be better if it hade more chapters
Maggie
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
Aw, it was so CUTE!
EvilFaerie17
2006-10-11 . chapter 1
i liked this story!
Kadeana
2006-10-03 . chapter 1
How did I miss this. I can relate to Caleb's plight. Poor guy. He was so the better pick.
Destiny Kitty
2006-08-18 . chapter 1
Definately liked the story. Unrequited love is such a sad sentiment but it's so annoyingly common that it should be written about. I mean, how many people haven't had something like this happen to them? I empathize with Caleb, and with Irma in your other song-fic. I also agree with the pairing; I really don't like Cornelia with Caleb and find Matt passe, only a necessary character to take Caleb's place since he isn't with Wil. Normally it seems like the two leaders would be together even though that might cause tension between their positions. I like the way you describe Caleb as an alien and comment on the fact that he really is accustomed to a much different life than the one he falls into here on earth, even if it does hold similarities in relationships. And he put so much thought into her present *smile* It is amusing that he finds solice in the similar feelings of a looked-down-on boy band - I'm sure they're not as bad as all that. And it's a shame that he gives up at the end, but what else could he do I suppose.
Kudos! I love your descriptive ability :)
Keahi Spitfire
2006-06-12 . chapter 1
I loved this story. Actualy, when I first started to watch the show, I liked the Will/Caleb pairing. Still kinda do lol.
Hells agent
2006-05-25 . chapter 1
I simply LOVE Will/Caleb pairing. I don't know why...but it seemed to me like the show started with more hints for that couple than Caleb/Cornelia (I mean, in one episode, he *grabbed* Will and didn't let her go for about four minutes of the show). This story is so...wonderful...that I felt sudden interest for the show. I even started watching it because of your fics!
I would be ecstatic if you only made a W/C fic (not oneshot. Guess you can't win 'em all...
daimazu
2006-05-07 . chapter 1
Very sensitive! I can see Caleb brooding - and hear him sigh!
Valnott
2006-05-03 . chapter 1
i read this a few weeks ago, but didn't have time to review. that sux for Caleb, but yeah, i agree with your other friend that u should make a sequel. see ya ^_^
FallennAngel
2006-04-22 . chapter 1
CUTE! plz rite more stories soon!
DataIntegrationThoughtEntity
2006-04-19 . chapter 1
Haha, amazing Sokai, just amazing. You did a magnificent job magnifying Caleb's emotions, and the song fits perfectly. Can't find anything that needs inprovment, so I'll be going now, later!
Violent Pixi
2006-04-16 . chapter 1
DO A SEQUAL now! PLEASE GET WILL AND CALEB TOGETHER. WxM & CxC suck. absolutly SUCK!
Kitsune6
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
I don't like songfics. This one was okay, though. It had plenty of narration. Good job.
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