Reviews for Absolute Beginners

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JapanManiac 2008-03-23 ch 5,	abusewhy won't you updated? this story are one of the better story i found at the fandom and you abandoned it?
blueraven1999 2006-09-21 ch 5, anon.	abuseStill a good story. I like the other chapters better, but this is still one of the best Sora stories on this site. Please continue writing when you have the time.
Tylec Asroc 2006-09-20 ch 5,	abuseIt's seems we've just met the AI Sora whom Helba introduces to Kite at the end of the series. Sora's family ties are shocking, but wierdly appropriate: the apple doesn't fall far from the tree in this family of nutty PCs. (Never did clue in to BT until I read the reviews - their age gap lead me to disregard her.) What stands out most in my mind is Sora's encounter with Moiseur of the Myst Spring - it's something delightfully new, not only revealing that these forgettable programs actually have a spark of intelligence behind them, but using their boosted IQ and awareness to demonstrate that Aura's not just a replacement OS - she's actually improving the system and giving it improved capabilites. It's also such a neat bit of character building for Morganna - the raging mistress of the Victorian household, hunting for the tiniest excuses to kick her servants around. It's scary how well your Sora and his skeith abilities fit with the developments of the G.U. saga.
Steeple333 2006-08-16 ch 5,	abuseOh! It's... that other Sora, isn't it? Ohh, I wanna know what's gonna happen. Anyway, poor Sora. He has so many things to deal with. I like that he always plays around and stuff (the handstand, tumbling, etc.) when he's nervous. It is a way to expend energy. After all, most nervous ticks are ways to expel energy, I've noticed. I think Sora does have that sort of relationship with Helba, but I think it's once removed, since he says she's a "friend of a friend". I think the mutual friend is Wiseman. ;D But there's a step further to that theory of mine. This is great. Please, write more if you can, because I am greatly interested.
nobody 2006-08-15 ch 4, anon.	abuseI love the how you've portrayed the characters! I also like that part about Elk being a system administrator. The sheer honesty of the characters' thought processes is entertaining. I like how A20's got little brothers that she uses to compare Sora with...I'm also downright impressed that you thought to put those ideas in here. Eager for the next chapter!
blueraven1999 2006-07-14 ch 4, anon.	abuseGreat chapter. I loved the part where he was stuck in A20's computer and the virus protection came after him. Keep up the good work and update soon please.
Steeple333 2006-07-03 ch 4,	abuseVery interesting! I really like this fic~ The concept of Sora in her comp is very interesting, too. You put things so well, anyone could understand. ^_^ Now to check your story comments...
Megaolix 2006-06-16 ch 4,	abuseM... While you make them meet Kite in the future? That would sure be interesting. Great work as always.
blueraven1999 2006-06-12 ch 3, anon.	abuseStill a great story. I don't care much for oc's but yours didn't bother me very much. Please update when you have the time and keep up the good work.
Zero-Vision 2006-05-22 ch 3,	abusecool
Steeple333 2006-05-16 ch 3,	abuseI love this. Truly. ^_^ You capture their personalities so well~ AU indeed, but very good and interesting and .hackish in plot nature nonetheless. A couple things, though. 1. In the Japanese at least, Mia's speech was unaffected, just her text. 2. Unless you're talking about McDonald's take-out, it's "through", not "thru".
blueraven1999 2006-04-26 ch 2, anon.	abuseGreat chapter. Sora's really in character. I can picture him doing all those things. Please continue the story when you have the time.
vanessa herrera 2006-04-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseI really liked it.Its so cool how you just make the characters come alive and everything. Finsh the story.I dont know what another people would say. But to me you should keep on writing it.Its really good.
Spanner 2006-04-14 ch 2,	abuseIt's been a long time since I read a really good dotHack story, and this one really has me engaged! I definitely like your take on the post-game dotHack world, and Sora's struggles within it. I look forward to seeing how he solves the mystery of his current situation, and what A20 will be able to do to help. Please, keep writing!
Rogue AI (not logged in) 2006-04-09 ch 2, anon.	abuseWow! This is amazing! I like the way you set it in the games' time frame, but added little twists- e.g. Piros being Sora's father! Please continue soon!

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