no continuation? what? no please continue, this is so good. what's with tenten's mission? it's obvious that sei feels uneasy, if not jealous, when neji spends time with tenten. sad that they can never be it seems, tenten and neji i mean, not with him already having a son. but is there some way that you can make it so that they'll be together? then again i can never see tenten as a home wrecker.

do please come back and continue.

I realize you are probably still in Japan and without an internet connection, but when you do get it back, do you think you could work on this story? I think your premise is great and it has great potential and I like your description and style of writing, so if you have the time...

Interesting plot! I'm rather curious about the relationship between Tenten and Neji also Sei and Tenten. Tenten's moving outta Konoha isn't she? Sounds like it. Or at least going on a super super long mission. Anyway, please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next! -

i absolutely love your writing. i've noticed that you published this chapter a while back and i hope you haven't lost your muse for it. it seems rather promising and i hope to see where you take this story. nonethless, keep up the great writing!

o a good Neji Tenten fic, finally! Love the Lee Neji dynamics as well, you manage to make a comedic character realistic. And yes we all know that Neji will eventually have to marry another Hyuuga. It's just fate. So good for you to actually write it.

Well, I certainly felt a pang learning that Neji is already married and not to Tenten! ' But your story got me hooked right away. I am so curious as to what is going to happen and what's going on with Tenten. I hope to see more soon.

Contine! Please please continue! I really do like your style of writing! And, plus, I like the 'abnormality' as you put it- it makes a refreshing change from the other NejiTen fics I've been reading! I especially liked how you did Tenten's character! _ Please continue!

well, that was intersting. i like how this story begins in the middle of an event, rather than beginning with a brief summary of all the characters and intrigue. haha. it tends to become a little repetitive and annoying, eh?

Tenten's actions are quite suspicious. and the whole situation with Neji and Sei also rises some eyebrows - why did he hesitate, and why does she ..protest?.. the time Neji spends with Tenten. That was why she hesitated, was it not?

well, i look forward to reading some more! continue please. and check out my story "Sacrifice," i think there are some similarities between basic aspects of our two stories.

QBC

wow...i really enjoyed this! is tenten going on a suicide mission or something of the like? woot for nejiten! please update soon!

Oh! Sweet! I love the feel of this.

...HEY! WAIT! MATTE and all that crap! NEJI'S MARRIED! And with a CHILD! How... How can this be a NejiTen, without the whole, bringing the two names (and individuals) together? ... I think...

I need to lay off the sugar...

...And the period button... XD

No, seriously. Update, this has POTENTIAL! Potential out the ying-yang!

It's very good! Please update.

i love it..love it...love it..Please do carry on. This fic is highly addictive.