Interesting plot! I'm rather curious about the relationship between Tenten and Neji also Sei and Tenten. Tenten's moving outta Konoha isn't she? Sounds like it. Or at least going on a super super long mission. Anyway, please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next! ^-^

i absolutely love your writing. i've noticed that you published this chapter a while back and i hope you haven't lost your muse for it. it seems rather promising and i hope to see where you take this story. nonethless, keep up the great writing!

o a good Neji Tenten fic, finally! Love the Lee Neji dynamics as well, you manage to make a comedic character realistic. And yes we all know that Neji will eventually have to marry another Hyuuga. It's just fate. So good for you to actually write it.

Well, I certainly felt a pang learning that Neji is already married and not to Tenten! ^^' But your story got me hooked right away. I am so curious as to what is going to happen and what's going on with Tenten. I hope to see more soon.

Contine! Please please continue! I really do like your style of writing! And, plus, I like the 'abnormality' as you put it- it makes a refreshing change from the other NejiTen fics I've been reading! I especially liked how you did Tenten's character! ^_^ Please continue!

well, that was intersting. i like how this story begins in the middle of an event, rather than beginning with a brief summary of all the characters and intrigue. haha. it tends to become a little repetitive and annoying, eh?

Tenten's actions are quite suspicious. and the whole situation with Neji and Sei also rises some eyebrows - why did he hesitate, and why does she ..protest?.. the time Neji spends with Tenten. That was why she hesitated, was it not?

well, i look forward to reading some more! continue please. and check out my story "Sacrifice," i think there are some similarities between basic aspects of our two stories.

QBC

wow...i really enjoyed this! is tenten going on a suicide mission or something of the like?! woot for nejiten! please update soon!

Oh! Sweet! I love the feel of this.

...HEY! WAIT! MATTE and all that crap!! NEJI'S MARRIED! And with a CHILD! How... How can this be a NejiTen, without the whole, bringing the two names (and individuals) together? ... I think...

I need to lay off the sugar...

...And the period button... XD

No, seriously. Update, this has POTENTIAL! Potential out the ying-yang!

It's very good! Please update.

i love it..love it...love it..Please do carry on. This fic is highly addictive.