 pyrorynox 2009-10-30 . chapter 1I actually read this one quite a while back but forgot to reveiw on it. Megs is quite the crafty bot. yes. I felt like this really had a lot of twists that nobody was expecting. I for one thought they were gonna vote him guilty from the get-go, but you completely turned it around in Meg's favor. The story has the potential to become a full blown fic if you wanted to do that and that would be awesome. Anyway, great one shot. I'm hoping to see more of megatron. Yes. |
 Twilightgirl 2008-04-02 . chapter 1Hiya Deepmetal, it's Nyx from BWINT
I know I promised to do a review for awhile, Forgive me!
Anyways, onward and forward! XD
Now, this story really interested me to no end, it starts with Megatron's future looking bleak and it looks like he's signing a death wish when he says he'll represent himself. I even thought that he was going to the chopping block! But using some of the best writing skills that I could never posses, (I sound like Megatron now! XD Wanting to posses something! Yes!) You've hidden every detail until the last minute when it counts. Every detail, every scene was very clear in my mind. I cannot fault you in anyway.
Though, Optimus walking out like that surprized me but then again, it caused a good impact. This story has also highlighted our own lives, the way the justice system seem only to support the guilty, even though we know that no good will come of releseing them, as we see with Megatron now invading Cybertron.
This story was a joy to read and it also raised questions about justice and how we interpert it. It also highlights also that Megatron the 2nd (G1 Megs remember! XD)is a power crazy tyrant but also one of the best masterminds that walked the planet of Cybertron.
Even though it looks bleak for Maximal kind, I'd like to think that one day, (In the future of the story of course!) that the tyrant will meet his match and get the justice that was hoped for in the begining.
(Wow...That was deep...)
I hope this helps you for future stories and I hope you can read my crappy spellings XD
This is Twilightgirl/Nyx Signing off! |