I absolutely love your story and I can't wait to read the second one :-).

Keep up the very good work!

EagleBlaze954

Though she did ditch him at the end.

Again I was really engaged by this. I just wanted to keep going to find out how the story would unfold. The portrayal of Quackerjack was pretty intense, a very effective version of the villain. And I liked the way Morgana was portrayed, too... she gets on my nerves sometimes on the show, blasting Drake with spells and stuff, but she didn't pull that here.

I am speechless! What an amazing astounding introduction to Morgana, I thought that the story they produced for the cartoon was interesting, but OMG this story was utterly spectacular, I was truely beside myself, with so many emotions. I cannot tell you, how glad I was that I didn't have to wait, for all the chapters to come in bit by bit, it would have been sheer agony. You did such a super job with everything. Quacker Jack was weird enough in the series, but brother, he was downright creepy in your story. Wow! Fabulous job alround yet again.

Wonderful ending, very epic. I quite enjoyed it!^^

Yay! Happy ending!

Quakerjack: Aw, man! I died!

Kat: Shut up and go back to Hell, you son of a **! You're supposedly dead, but that doesn't mean I won't kill you again for what you've done!

*goes and stab/kick/punch/shoot/bomb/burn/suffocate/drown/
rips apart Quackerjack*

QuackerJACK!

Quackerjack: Um...yes...*gulp*

Kat: Now tell me...what are you planning? I can tell if you lie, so fess up!

Quackerjack: Me? Planning? What gave you that idea,
Meow Mix?

Kat: Get. out. of. my. sight. before. I. RIP. MR. BANANA BRAIN'S. HEAD. OFF!

Quackerjack: YES SIR, MA'AM! *bolts out of the room*

No! NO! It's not true! Darkwing would never kill his parents.
*silence*
would he?

No! Darkwing!

Quackerjack: Yes, perfect shot! I got him!

Kat:Shut up! Shut UP, SHUT UP! I'll kill you Quackerjack! You're going to Hell tonight, wrapped up in a god damn handbasket!

Quackerjack:*is stabbed several thousand times with triple-bladed dagger*

Kat: AND YOU'RE STILL GROUNDED!

Oh boy...
What's Quacky got planned this time..?

Quackerjack: An evil scheme, FYI, and DON'T call me Quacky, Kitty!

Kat(me): Oh, you did NOT just call me that, Toys-for-brains! THAT'S IT! No more wreaking havoc until I say so!

Quackerjack: What if I don't want to, KITKAT BAR!

Kat:*murderous glare* You just bought yourself a one way ticket to being grounded for life.

Quackerjack: No! All right fine, but do I HAVE to stop planning against Dorkwing Duck?

Kat:*even more murderous glare* OK, Toybox, if you EVER want to see Mr. Banana Brain EVER again, do not ever let me hear you call Darkwing that again.
NOW GO TO YOUR ROOM, AND STAY THERE UNTIL I CALM DOWN ENOUGH TO LET YOU OUT!

Quackerjack:*walks dejectedly out of room* Yes, ma'am...



OK...ahem...now that that's over with, please continue. I find this quite interesting, so...yeah...

Oh who's the mysterious "dark voice"? Negaduck, maybe? Guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out!
Poor Quackerjack, all he wants to do is play, but nobody understands that. Darkwing and MegaVolt always have to spoil his fun...

O...K... 0.o

Hi, your story is a sheer masterpiece! It is a beautiful work of art! Keep it up!

hi again, I have to be honest. I like it but not as much as the first one. Quacky scared the hell out of me! I'm afriad blood and gore makes me sick. but on a postive note! I loved the refences to Drakes childhood and Megavolt! and how you described Morrg was perfect!