Great story! I'm impressed with how well you captured the essence of Tifa's problem. It's actually inspiring in an odd way to my own writing, since Tifa has a lot of issues in my stories as well. Good work!

Oh wow. THis is really good! So I hate to stereotype here, but this is great writing for a guy! Haha, most of the stories I read are by women, so I'm thoroughly impressed. Great first chapter! =]

short story? how much would you put as a 'long' story? ( i can't help but laugh at my self)^_^

No offence but i think your beta made just a little bit of more mistakes than you thought. no offence but that is my opinion. Anyway love your story it is good. Sorry in a hurry to type. Sorry for my mistakes. Kepp up the good work.

i really like this story. if you like ff7 try reading the summoner's guardian: the sin legact by cover me with starlight. it's awesome.

Well, you definitly left this wide open for a sequel.

Well, looks like things are getting in order. Can only wish for a happy ending.

"Uh oh" is right! :-P

Where's Red? I would have figured he would of at least been at the hospital. Oh well.
With a name like Jeeves he was destined to become a butler lol.

I just recently experienced being on a boat. It definitly helps to be able to see outside rather than going below deck to fight seasickness. Horrible feeling it is to feel that churn.

That Gateway thing doesn't sound like a good thing to mess around with. Didn't Yuffie get airsick? Also I thought Vincent's original eye color was blue, not brown.

Well at least the other alcohol is under locks. I wonder how long they're staying at the ranch?

Sweet chapter, the part with Yuffie was funny.

Is Cid going to be able to kick the habit so easily? It's going to be a tough road for the both of them.

I'm a bit confused, but I'm gonna take it that they're still at the hospital to a point before the heart monitor alert.