i love both endings but u should make another part with the 1st ending where rin ends up pregnant with his baby and she leaves the villege in search of him but trouble comes and she must call out to him whether or not he hears but does come ane saves her again only to witness his hire to be born a son and he aint mated due to his love for her... but its just a thought cos i really loved it

woa... I prefer the alternate ending... he was searching to not lose her again... cool fic!

au revoir!


HawkAngel

I like your story,...the 2nd ending was better!

I liked it especially the second ending. :)

very good

Great oneshot

Wow, this is really a neat story... what makes it better is you have a alternate ending and that's cool. This one-shot is well done and love it more since its based on my fav couple from this series. You stayed in character with Sesshoumaru which can be tough to do but you pulled through. Excellent work!

Loved it, great write. Loved both endings, so happy that I wasn't cheated,lol. Great work hope to read more of yoru work later on, till another time. Later

That was wonderful! Written very well, not many points for creativity for it was based on a dream

omg! i like the last one the best! i loved it *faves*

it just so happens that every story i read makes me cry! T_T i really love your story! especially the alternate endings...i guess i liked both endings! ^_^ i really liked the first one though...

touching story, really.

the alternate ending is better and i love your story...

Wha? I don get it. I have 1 question 4 wuo: Are u gonna write more?! Cuz I think u need to befroe I hunt u down and force u to write more until ur brain hurts and you pass out from exhustion!
Do as I say or face the concisquences!
( I have spelling issues over here!)
Heh-heh-heh!

I love the alternate ending! It's great! I like it better than the origional!