Ohh.It almost brought tears to my eyes.I loved the supernatural element in your story and how you fitted, it into what the movie failed to portay;)

This must have escaped me ! A sweet and beautiful story, the connections between their youthful promise of eternal friendship and their sad and untimely, far too early deaths so well written and tied together. I especially liked it how you make Alexander give the ring to Hephaestion in your remaking of this most poignant scene from the movie.

All the best wishes,

// NorthernLight

aw that was sad but i liked the spirit comeing back for him part that was sweet good story.

Poignant but lovely.

A beautifully haunting story! I loved the way you blended in the death scenes from the film - especially where Alexander was holding out the ring. So he was really offering it to Hephaestion! I also loved the way people shivered as Hephaestion passed by them, and the bond between the two boys at the beginning! Once again the only complaint I have is that it was too short - it was over too quickly!