I remember Silkies. I got a lovely book of Scottish faerie tails when I was in Europe and one of them was about a seal hunter who accidentally stabbed the king of the Silkies. Then, the rest of the Silkies all took their vengeance upon him by kidnapping him, chucking him over a cliff and turning him into a seal. Why are sea-people tales always so depressing in the end?
In the book, there was also a sorry about a girl who met a toad, married him, then found him so irritable that she chopped him into little pieces with an ax, which had the odd effect of turning him into a dashing prince. o_0


I love how Kaito refers to Hakuba as not-a-fish.

your story lacked detail and it was hard to tell which person was talking. Im pretty sure you could do better than this.

great story
laughrd all throughout

Well, I took the plunge and finally read this story. You have a gift for combining fairytales and stories and turning out something that no one else would have thought of. It was quite entertaining, nice job.

Love how he refers to navel-gazing as contemplating his belly button. It's just the right ratio of glib to serious. XD

Wonderful story, its very funny.
But it got me thinking;
at the beginning when the 'not-a-fish' Hakuba is kissing Kaito, giving him air. doesn't that mean that he has gills? (not bringing up how fish have gills)
Couldn't they, with the gills, he could sit there giving Kaito air all day right?
Which got me thinking, what if Kaito was also a merman 'not a fish' thing.
Wouldn't they be able to just sit (or swim in place) all day kissing as such with the gills on their necks, filtering air so that they dont have to breathe as the little mermaid, the disney one, suggest?
*imagines Hakuba and Kaito kissing for three hours non stop, with Hakuba checking his pocket watch everynow and then.*
Well, now you realize that I over think everything past 1.00 in the morning.
Oh well.
Once again wonderful story. Never new that there was a more gruesome little mermaid story.
But once I heard Hans Christan Andersons name I shoulda' figured as much...XD

*laughs hysterically* I never thought I'd read shounen ai willingly. First time for everything, I guess.

This kind of reminds me of a Conan/Kid doujin.

Silkie, very nice... although I always thought silkies were bound to roam instead of "she couldn't leave." but then the lines wouldn't flow well if that's the case.

YAY! I love this fic! XD

Wow - that was one of the best one-shot Hakuba/Kaito I've read to date.
Some try to write them. You actually write them.

Really like how it flows - like the sea XD - anyway great job...
and I'm sure you've already got a sequel forming so do it!

very interesting- in fact.. this sort of makes me giggle, but in a weird way. O.o Anyways, uhm.. very unique story!

(Being lazy and not logging in)

Read the earlier version of this on the LJ but still enjoy it muchly.

How big is the orca end, I wonder. *ponders*