As writing goes, this is actually some pretty good work. It is...nearly impossible to fiind good PokeSpecial fanfiction, so I was really relieved to see the quality of writing you put forward. The only thing I would caution...make sure Sapphire doesn't slip out of character, 'kay? ^^

Will you continue it? Please do!! I'm ADDICTED to this!!

please update, really like it go

Yes, I know you mentioned already that it was short. But it was too short. You don't need to post things right away; take your time typing, editing, etc. until you're happy with the chapter/story. That is, unless you're happy with it being short. xD

I like it though. I'm glad to see that it's not dead. =3

Nice! Good description! You're a great writer. Maybe a little more romance later would help xD lol I'm a rubyxsapphire fan xP lol I have the whole series in Korean. I'm Korean o_O Anyways, you wrote this in June! I'm reviewing in February! UPDATE PLZ xD

Good plot, and a good story. Very Good.

Very emotional, I like it!!

Really, nice so far. I love RubyxSapphire :D and I always wanted to see a fic about finding Mimi..! ^^ Awesomeness. There's alot of description which is good but for some reason I think you need to put more paragraphs, kind of hard to read.

But still, update please. :D

PLEASE UPDATE!

not bad~plz update as soon as possible wor~=O

tad bit lazy to sign in.Anywayz, its pretty good so far. I just a bit confused, don't worry, not your fault, maybe I should re-read this? Ah welz, Keep up the good work!