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killercow89
2008-06-11
ch 4,
abusei feel soz for Sally. b update soon i want to find out wot happens nxt
Elliesmeow
2007-05-12
ch 4,
abusePoor Sally. I wonder what the deal is with her. Why she saw all those different things when she died and was set to cross over.

I'm thrilled to see a softer side of John so I hope she and Chas and Angela all stick around. It's nice that John has a little peace and happiness. Reminds him what he's fighting for.

Looking forward to more. Angela should be able to help Sally along having been in the position of losing a sister once herself.

-Ellie
0ra3ngxsp0rk
2007-01-25
ch 4,
abuseI like it!!

I didn't see the sister part coming though. Very exciting. Update soon!!
Drakb
2007-01-03
ch 4, anon.
abuseOk. I've quickly got sucked in. You have totally grabbed my imagination and ran away with it. I want it back please... or at least more of this story as a substitute.

I like your characterizations, I can totally see the movie characters acting out these lines. It's good to have Chas there. And I don't usually get attached to OC that much but I am dying to learn what happens next with Sally.

Thanks for the reality break... it was great!
Vengeance
2006-08-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseUPDATE PLEASE!

I think the storyline and writing style is riveting. Please update soon, it's been more than 4 months!!
Ithilwen6
2006-03-28
ch 4,
abuseThat was a fast update =)
And a great chapter...oh oh...Angela's being inquisitive and quite unsensitive...but..she's an detective..so it's her job!

Kepp the chapters coming =D
J.R. Jones
2006-03-27
ch 4,
abuseI think this story is really good i hope you keep writing cause it is good lol
~ J.R. Jones
devastee
2006-03-26
ch 4,
abuseThis is seriously getting more and more interesting. Thank you so much for updating (hope you update soon)!! The two chaps were incredibly brill!! :D
Ithilwen6
2006-03-26
ch 3,
abusehm , this story gets more and more interesting =)
Thank you so much for updating, you made my day !
RedRogue
2006-03-26
ch 3,
abuseA prostitute, huh? How does a prostitute get to be an angel? I'm lost onto how that works, but I'm accepting the fact that it did somehow, and I find it very interesting and strangely funny. Sally seems to have demons in her mind (demons in the angel's mind... huh- crazy) that she hasn't dealt with. Maybe Chas can help her out a bit on getting though that one. When is the plot going to unfold? Is there a plot at all? I'm anxious to get on with it... and impatiently await your update. I request it too be sooner rather than later.
Signed,
--RedRogue
RedRogue
2006-03-14
ch 2,
abuseFirst off, thanks for reviewing my own Constantine fic... Very nice compliments. I thought I'd return the favor.
Second, your story has wonderful detail, good character development and good story structure. The pace seems a bit unbalanced, but that's fine. It's too early to critique. I look forward to seeing what you have in store... and maybe expounding a bit on that "seductive-demon-cookie-jar". Oh, the scandal. Drama= Good. :)
Your John is wonderful, and so is your Chas. I'd would like to see more of them, but like I said, it's only the second chapter. Keep it up, post soon, all that. And return the favor back, if you don't mind.
Signed,
--RedRogue
Ithilwen6
2006-03-10
ch 2,
abuseHere are you're promised cookies *throws cookies*

=)

I like the way this story is, because it's not so John fixated but Sally, it's nice to read a story like that, so keep on updating =)
Ithilwen6
2006-03-06
ch 1,
abuseCome On give us an UPDATE!! =)

And you'll get cookies..,maybe even DoubleChoclate =)

To be serious...I like this story =)
devastee
2006-03-03
ch 1,
abuseThis is fascinating! You've really made my day :D
Please Please Please continue! :)
JEN
2006-03-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's good! More please
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