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| killercow89 2008-06-11 ch 4, | abusei feel soz for Sally. b update soon i want to find out wot happens nxt |
| Elliesmeow 2007-05-12 ch 4, | abusePoor Sally. I wonder what the deal is with her. Why she saw all those different things when she died and was set to cross over. I'm thrilled to see a softer side of John so I hope she and Chas and Angela all stick around. It's nice that John has a little peace and happiness. Reminds him what he's fighting for. Looking forward to more. Angela should be able to help Sally along having been in the position of losing a sister once herself. -Ellie |
| 0ra3ngxsp0rk 2007-01-25 ch 4, | abuseI like it!! I didn't see the sister part coming though. Very exciting. Update soon!! |
| Drakb 2007-01-03 ch 4, anon. | abuseOk. I've quickly got sucked in. You have totally grabbed my imagination and ran away with it. I want it back please... or at least more of this story as a substitute. I like your characterizations, I can totally see the movie characters acting out these lines. It's good to have Chas there. And I don't usually get attached to OC that much but I am dying to learn what happens next with Sally. Thanks for the reality break... it was great! |
| Vengeance 2006-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseUPDATE PLEASE! I think the storyline and writing style is riveting. Please update soon, it's been more than 4 months!! |
| Ithilwen6 2006-03-28 ch 4, | abuseThat was a fast update =) And a great chapter...oh oh...Angela's being inquisitive and quite unsensitive...but..she's an detective..so it's her job! Kepp the chapters coming =D |
| J.R. Jones 2006-03-27 ch 4, | abuseI think this story is really good i hope you keep writing cause it is good lol ~ J.R. Jones |
| devastee 2006-03-26 ch 4, | abuseThis is seriously getting more and more interesting. Thank you so much for updating (hope you update soon)!! The two chaps were incredibly brill!! :D |
| Ithilwen6 2006-03-26 ch 3, | abusehm , this story gets more and more interesting =) Thank you so much for updating, you made my day ! |
| RedRogue 2006-03-26 ch 3, | abuseA prostitute, huh? How does a prostitute get to be an angel? I'm lost onto how that works, but I'm accepting the fact that it did somehow, and I find it very interesting and strangely funny. Sally seems to have demons in her mind (demons in the angel's mind... huh- crazy) that she hasn't dealt with. Maybe Chas can help her out a bit on getting though that one. When is the plot going to unfold? Is there a plot at all? I'm anxious to get on with it... and impatiently await your update. I request it too be sooner rather than later. Signed, --RedRogue |
| RedRogue 2006-03-14 ch 2, | abuseFirst off, thanks for reviewing my own Constantine fic... Very nice compliments. I thought I'd return the favor. Second, your story has wonderful detail, good character development and good story structure. The pace seems a bit unbalanced, but that's fine. It's too early to critique. I look forward to seeing what you have in store... and maybe expounding a bit on that "seductive-demon-cookie-jar". Oh, the scandal. Drama= Good. :) Your John is wonderful, and so is your Chas. I'd would like to see more of them, but like I said, it's only the second chapter. Keep it up, post soon, all that. And return the favor back, if you don't mind. Signed, --RedRogue |
| Ithilwen6 2006-03-10 ch 2, | abuseHere are you're promised cookies *throws cookies* =) I like the way this story is, because it's not so John fixated but Sally, it's nice to read a story like that, so keep on updating =) |
| Ithilwen6 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseCome On give us an UPDATE!! =) And you'll get cookies..,maybe even DoubleChoclate =) To be serious...I like this story =) |
| devastee 2006-03-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is fascinating! You've really made my day :D Please Please Please continue! :) |
| JEN 2006-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's good! More please |