So cute!

Aw! So cute. I can imagine this all in my head..

The fluff is sticky sweet! But very nice all the same. This is short and to the point, but it conveys such a feeling that I can't help but love it. I can envision this happening very clearly, see both Greil and Ike spotting this little waif and taking him hom to care for him. It's very nice.

I'd almost like to see this from the perspective of Ike or Greil too, as a partner piece, just to see how it's interpreted differently from a different viewpoint. But I suppose I can just envison this, too.

Nice job, very cute.

Velkyn Karma

Aww...How sweet!

Aw! That's so sad/cute! Ar, I really like your stories, I want more!

Aww...poor Soren...

Aw! This was so sweet and moving; tears nearly came to my eyes, and that doesn't happen often (especially with Soren/Ike fics, which are often way too overdone and sappy). You are probably THE only person I've found on this site to write Soren/Ike fics that don't make me squirm horribly in embarrassment over the OOC-ness (oh, and metal goat...but that was a one-sided thing, kinda). And your writing style just rocks. It's rare that you find a dudely-love fic that puts more focus on the emotional power rather than smuttyness, and it is quite refreshing.

So, kudos to ya.

aww...this is so gloomy but it gets so cute! I love the end line so much :3 precious

To be honest, this is a scene that's done a lot. The plot is hardly original. However, I'm always a fan of your writing style.