Aw, haha, that was so sappy but sweet. Completely sweet. I loved reading teh letter and the reasons. It's very amusing. And I love the ending. It's so *hint hint* esque. ^^

That was SWEET. It was clever how you made Tezuka engage Fuji like that.

You've made some grammatical errors, though. Watch your tenses VERY carefully; you mix them up continually. And it's 'though,' not 'thou.' 'Thou' was how Old Englishmen said 'you.' And having Tezuka say things like 'ya know' and 'gonna' is completely out of character--watch who you let use slang.

Don't take that the wrong way--I loved this fic, and I'm about to go read the other birthday one you mention in this one. Peace,
Lilacs

hya!
cute! I like&love it. Yeah, a bit different from ur style before, but i don't mind cuz it's really good ^^

by the way, can u share some tips to write tezufuji angst fic? hehehe...

hi again!
another good story!
luv it to the end!!
write another 1 sometimes, ne?

Squee! That was the most wonderful, most romantic and beautiful thing I've ever read! You truely must have a gentle soul to make something as incredibly moving as this amazing little story. Thank you so much for sharing. Brushes own tears out of eyes..

that was... was... ah.. words couldn't express. hahaha..
good job! thanks for the fic.