Wonderful story, and a great mix of magic and all those elements! I'm so happy there's finally a completed fanfic about Ma Chao and his wife; and a great on at that.

SO HAPPY YOU COMPLETED IT! I have'nt finished reading it yet...but I just had to stop and express my happiness! THANK YOU!

This was an amazing story. Astounding plotline and excellent detaiis. I enjoy your other stories as well. Keep writing.

u r an amazing writer! i cant wait to read what happens next! DONT STOP WRITING!

u r an amazing writer! i cant wait to read what happens next! DONT STOP WRITING!

God I love this story, you have Ma Chao's character on spot! I can't wait for more.

I must say, I do like your feast scenes :D They always seem so lively and interesting. And I liked the bit with the wild horses as well - you did a great job on describing them. Good work!

Oh my god, I just want to scream at you for being so awesome. Like you said about Warrior of Art, I can't believe that I kept on ignoring the alerts I got for this story for so long. I'm seriously absolutely in awe of your writing style. Don't you dare change it!

Gawsh, I love your writing style!
Yes. Hi. *awkward silence*

Can't wait to see what happens next. Cao Pi is so arrogant haha.

Is something brewing up?

Well anyway, it's another nice chapter, although not as interesting as the first. But it's nicely done.

Nice chapter. It's a good take since there's hardly any fics(if none at all) about Ma Chao, even though this one seems to be more about Yang Xing, anyway, like I said, it's really great and I can't wait for the next update/s ^_^ Keep it up

Good intro chapter, I look forward to more.

oh, nice introduction. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow! Thsi is very well writeen. lol, seems like something I would write..I like this alot please continue! ^^ Lady Yang is like so cool! YES...and..and..MA CHAO IS HOT! yes..hehehe...not as hot as Ningy though, and not nearly as cute as Xuny! Well, I find it starnge that her officers were able to fo it like that..Where did all those people come from in the first place! whoa..yet she is still reeking of awesomeness...So, that was an interesting Chapter and I'm wondering how she ended up allthe way that far with the allied army..and how she is going to wind up at like shu or whatever..hmm..what was her weapons again? confusdes..O.O UPDATE SOON PLEZ! And yes I am a very loyal reveiwer so expect atleast one reveiw per chappie from me ^^
Cenasgirl456 =^.^=