Waaah... Sugoi!
I'd love your fanfic too much.
Because you make a ship between Kaori and Seisuke also Miki and Kyosuke.
You're great!

That's disgustingly bad. Hungry Heart is not a cheesy romance

hi! do you know where i can read the entire manga in english? lots of the manga hosted are only up to chapter 5. and i can't find any hungry heart manga for sale in my country. thanks.

nice ending thanks for ending the story

what happened to overtime and pk to decide the match?

nice, but 5-0 for japan vs. germany lol snowball's chance in hell. 15-0...no comment.

wow..

fantastic

Nice!

A little heavy on the weeaboo, but not bad overall.

hey, complete the story quick yeah?

i wanna know the result of the final match, PLEASE

hehe...15 goals...thas funny but it is ur fic i guess now if only someone scored 15 oals in the ongoing FIFA world cup...it'd be fun to se...nice story keep on going

nice story! im not a really big fan of hungry heart.. but its a good story pls. UPDATE soon!

Absolutely laughable. Mansion? Butler? "Master?" Kyousuke playing matchmaker? Admitting to their love over the Internet? Miki speaking in a "calm voice" over the damn NET? Obviously you have a lot to acquaint yourself with. Please research, at least a little bit, or at least be sure of what you're writing, before you really get down to it. Footballers don't become millionaires overnight, you know.

And while you're at it, do work on your writing, too.

Please don't consider this as a flame. I like where you're going with this story, but a lot of aspects need to be improved. You could start with capitilzation in the title, for instance.

Hi,

That was a good begining. Pretty fast-paced, i must say. But next chapter, please spend a little more time on descriptions.

Though having a butler in a Japan is kind of rare. The Kanou's aren't super- rich, plus I can't see an eccentric, madcap family , though seisuke's the only sane guy, like the Kanous hiring one.

That was a good read!