Deliciously wicked :)

A well-done "stream-of-consciousness" tale -- a type I've seen but rarely at .

darkly nice

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Ah, I should have saved my apron story for this review. Well, I'll know next time. Once again, masterfully done. I love that Cheshire Cat, with his earring!I have a special place in my heart for everything Alice. I wrote my thesis on Lewis Carroll. Have you ever read the books? I recommend the Annotated Edition, by Martin Gardner. It's filled with footnotes that help you understand all the clever puns and puzzles Carroll included. I even referenced it in an anthropology paper(The theory of the Red Queen), which makes me a geek.

Dark, but good. I can image that in the game. Is that what gave you the idea?

I like the idea of the story... and most definitely enjoy Alice... Excellent.

My only thought is that your use of sentence fragments occurs too often in the format. Its fine when writing emails, etc., but in a story it becomes bad grammer when used too often.

Other then that, excellent work my dear.

Wow...very creepy...I love it!

Creeptastic...

Once I get my PC I've gotta play this game!

I like it ^^

Ah, creepy Alice. I like this very much, kudos to pulling off Alice's persona so well
Thanks for the fic

When I started the game, that was almost exactly how I thought I would feel if I was Alice. It coulad have been longer, but I like it, so keep it up and write more.

oh yeah, I have to saw, nice way of looking at things. I've yet to play the game, but nor do i have the toys neccessary to do so. Great take on darkness.

Ahhhhhhh! Scary! I liked it alot, the suicide imagery is especially potent.

Good Job maggie.
Really really nice. my new bf is absolutly obsessed with this game, so i might have him read it too.
As usual, kick **