 Gundam-Issac 2007-09-16 . chapter 2Nice story dude, keep it up! |
 digi-milk 2006-12-16 . chapter 1please say this will be updated. I really like this story and I want to find out what happens. It's got a nice flow to it and I want to keep reading it. :)
~digi-milk |
 Anonymous Phantom Writer 2006-07-29 . chapter 2Ilove it please update soon! |
 Inuyashafeudalgirl 2006-03-05 . chapter 2Uh...wow...that was amazing. It is a fantastic story. I cannot wait till you update, which I hope will be soon. Um..I don't really know what to say. I'm dying to know what happened to the Fifth. And it's just sad at how Naruto is watched constantly. I would kill everyone if I was Naruto. Anyway, Until next time, Ja Ne!! |
 tagg 2006-03-04 . chapter 2 sheesh. if i were him, i'd say the hell with it and destroy konoha. they deserve it anyway. they were the ones who caused it to happen, the way they treated him his whole life. its a wonder he didnt do anything earlier. its their fault and they should be destroyed. |
 liankitty 2006-03-02 . chapter 2My god, I want to see Konoha burn so much! I can't wait for Naruto to snap, I can't wait until he literally paints the town red and I hope his friends step back and let him do it because the whole place has it coming.
The writing is very good, I really loved the thing about the plants, it was quite sweet and overall the language is very emotive.
This is a really impressive work.
Thanks for writing! |
 cbsnes 2006-03-02 . chapter 2Wow, good story. Looking forward to your next update. |
 Eromancer 2006-03-02 . chapter 2he "attacked" the 5th? oh **, this is NOT good. |
 tagg 2006-03-02 . chapter 1 why's he wearing manicles? and what happened to make him that way? |
 blackman 2006-03-02 . chapter 1ok this is grea, but what is special about the manacles because had to do something but not get chained up in a cell |
 IncandescentOne 2006-03-02 . chapter 1damn thats awesome, soo harsh on naruto but i feel its more realistic... whats with the manacles? O_o |
 The Eromancer 2006-03-01 . chapter 1not bad, hope it doesn't turn into Slash, not that I mind really, its just I can't really stand to read that stuff when its focused on the main character. For instance if it were Gaara or Sasuke of all people paired up with naruto I couldn't bring myself to read it. But moer than that, what I mean is that for who the story is focused on, I Simpley can not read them being gay, if its one of the side kicks who has a relationship like that by all means go ahead, I don't care. Its the same way I handle my life. I'm not gay, don't want to be gay, don't even want to know what goes on WITH gay people, but I'm friends with gay people, I'm not exactly comfotable around them when they show their affection to their partner but I'll bare it anyway, they're my friends, and I won't fault them for who they are. Doesn't mean I have to like it though either.
So, I'm hoping Naruto (the focus of "this" story) doesn't end up in a homosexual kinda relationship, its kinda creepy. |