 Dumbledork 2009-11-20 . chapter 10Finally got to reading this. I love it. And I'm happy that Ranma and the girls finally got together. |
 CyberAngelOne 2009-11-14 . chapter 10Nice to see that you are still active with this series. I love seeing that you are still writing and I can not wait to see the next chapter. I wander how much of a impact they are going to have on SG1. Plus are you going to let it go with out outside interference just this once.So of a break while the time gates are down do to the accendence keep others out. |
 Lumster 2009-11-14 . chapter 10 Always glad to see an update even if it is a rewrite, forced use anoymous due to previously reviewing the orginal chapter. Any ways I have to say I am a little disapointed with how easily Ranma and friends were captured. First off I can't really believe a little concrete and steel doors would stop Ranma if he REALLY wanted to get out. Nor to sit there 'trying to make time gate apear' all the while the room is filling up with gas and not even noticing anything. Then we go back to the 'captured, looted and totaly helpless crap' again. Would think after first time so easily subdued and held by the goverment Ranma and Co would worked hard at learning subspace pockets, secruity locks, hidden weapons or SOMETHING to keep their stuff with them or easy to find.
To say Ranma just sits back and lets them do what ever they want with no real fuss is kind of anoying. After all the harsh combat worlds Ranma and gang were in the SGC is cake walk and I am disapointed seeing them go down so quickly. It's like end the series DBZ Goku being taken down by the red ribben army goons.
If got a reply to this review can PM Vilkath, it's my real account here. |
 Clarej 2009-04-25 . chapter 10:( ... discontinued?. NO! I so love your fics, and it'd be so sad if this wouldn't be continued :).. |
 Cattsith 2008-12-30 . chapter 10I ran across you a week or so ago and I love your stories. Please continue to work on this one and the others! |
 Zenoen-the-mac-user 2008-11-25 . chapter 10is this story on hold because i would love to see a new chapter its a great story |
 Sdarian 2008-10-02 . chapter 10While I was rather put off by the first two chapters of Baba Yaga's Quests (as Ryoga suddenly becoming understanding, helpful, and buddy-buddy with Ranma is just too odd and sets off all kinds of flags saying that this might lead into yaoi territory), I was happy to see that it did pick up pretty quick. While there was the constant mispelling of the breaking point, it was still pretty good.
I'm happy as well that you decided to make this sequel, and it has been really good so far. I'm hoping that you will continue writing on this, as well as Black Contract. Keep up the good work! |
 Chris ShadowMoon 2008-04-17 . chapter 4this is one of the more interesting fanfiction I've read, I'll give you that much. My question is, as I'm only on chapter 4, is/are you going to put in Stargate? I think that would be... interesting, to say the least. |
 Bobboky 2007-11-26 . chapter 10awesome |
 AshK 2007-11-21 . chapter 10Nice work on this updatt Quontir! Keep up the great work!
Sincerely,
AshK |
 Innortal 2007-11-20 . chapter 10Odd new mix, well done. |
 Dragon Man 180 2007-11-20 . chapter 10Nice chapter. I hope Reese can adapt to life on Earth and doesn't become the next Skynet. |
 Vilkath 2007-11-20 . chapter 10Glad to see an update even if it seemed a bit short. Ofcourse all good fics seem short when you enjoy reading it I suppose. I hope the next update doesn't take to long. |
 Vilkath 2007-08-20 . chapter 9Glad to see the terminator arc come to a close as well, and I hope the next SGC arc isn't quite as dark and depressing. I also have to agree with the talking Time gate opening a lot of chances for some humor to be put into this fic again.
The other real question we are left with is when in the SGC universe will our travelers arive? Which season or series will it be? Will it be during the alantis arc or what.
I know you kind of had to make them force they way out of the gates to really introduce themselves to the SGC world, even if it is a bad way to make a first impression. Still I think it's kind of funny that they were so impatient about waiting that they wanted to leave without thinking.
Especialy since the gate mentioned earlier they wouldn't have most of their powers for a few the 3 weeks. With that said I'm under the impression not only are they charging into the SGC gate less then gracefuly but they can't evne achieve their senshi forms? |
 Vilkath 2007-08-20 . chapter 7Interesting as always so far, but I just feel the need to comment now even if there are still future chapters to read. It seems you have a slight tendency to have well detailed plans, actions and motives for all your enemies. Not to mention you give detailed acounts of their evil rampages for chapters on end before they 'might' come to some justice. While you obviously let Ranma win in the end, for the most part it sure seems like whole lots of innocents get in the way.
I mean the 'goverment' that was willing to kidnap, toture and kill Ranma only got a stern warning? I'm not saying he should of burned the base to the ground, but if he truely believed in ballance and change he could of at least tried leaking some info to the media or something to cause the goverment problems. Just ignoring such a corupt black ops form of goverment after several death attempts seems silly. Even after the possible end of skynet, Ranma should try help the regular world as well if he can.
Lastly I supose Beryl and Hotaru agreeing to share ranma and work together was nice, but having their 'first time' be with each other seemed a bit off. Not mention ranma's aversion to the girls, of all the Ranma xovers I've read you gave a pretty good reason for Ranma to leave Nermia. Phantom feelings for akane make little sense in this setting, and this is suposivly after several years alone, with ryoga and with the girls?
I supose in the end I just look forward to more chapters and hopefuly a 'less dark' story. Kind of disgusted by all the horrible acts of evil your vilians get away with, considering Ranma's more or less relaxed apraoch at brining them down. |