Absolutely wonderful one-shot.

Touching. I like it.

Amazing, absolutely amazing. I never thought of Miroku's earrings being passed down and this was definately an interesting take on the whole curse. Very well written and the last line was genius to the story. I can see why you won. ^-^ I'm so going to look for more Mir/San stories by you.

Have you read anything by ninalee-chan by chance? Her Mir/San fics are excellant and since you like the pairing, just thought I'd recommend. And if you know who I'm talking about, pardon me. -chuckles-

=D I like it.
It's really interesting a different too.
I don't think I have ever heard any fic going into any detail about Miroku's earrings. I like it! =D

That was absolutely wonderful.

I really liked that. I was looking for some well-written angst, which is very difficult to find these days. I love the little backstory you invented about the earrings- that was very original. The last line was just perfect.Keep up the good work!

I think it's cool and inspirational how you've taken a tiny, never-discussed detail from the canon and created a whole backstory for it, thus adding depth to the character without contradicting anything.

That was very good. Wow!! I really liked it, sometimes its hard to find a serious Miroku/Sango fic.

Wow...

I so want to encorporate thisnext time I write a canon MS story (all credit to you, of course). It was sweet. It was sad. But perhaps most importantly, it was unique. This wasn't the same old "first kiss" or "PWP" story. This was original.

And I am kind of jealous I didn't come up with the idea myself. But you did... and it is entirely fitting. I think, too, it gives a bit of charcter to Miroku's family something not many people do.

Arigatou gozaimasu.

Love,
the PoF

P.S. Yes, I know that's probably spelt wrong, but I wanted a rather formal and polite thank you... so I tried. ^_^

What a great idea, it fits with what we know and adds depth to the character.

I love this idea... And especially love the last line... This was really great!

I actually really enjoyed reading this. I was intrigued by the title and summary, and thought I would give it a read. Well done, it was nothing like I expected. You caught me completely off guard, and you found a very strong way to end the story. I think you took on an interesting perspective, and I'm glad that you decided to do a Miroku fic, since it's a change from InuYasha/Kagome fics. Well done, I hope you write more stories. Actually, I'm going to go and check if you have more. Again, well done, I think you did this nicely.

This is a really interesting perspective, and well-written. I love the sensations you share with the reader, making it as intimate as first-person narrative while remaining third-person. The part where Sango shows up seems a little random and unspecific, although I love the way you describe Miroku's experience, "...and his heartbeat in his cheek."

Your style is wonderfully subtle and artistic. I enjoyed this story a lot and look forward to reading more from you.

Oh, wow. I had never even thought about his earrings like that. Great observation! And great story as well. You captured what Miroku's feeling are perfectly (well, at least what I think his feelings are ^^;).

Ahh, fabulous! I love it! Very, very nice. ^_^