Nice little piece that meanders a bit and finishes rather unsatisfactorily, but well-written, nonetheless.

Anney.

Need a cold shower! but don't wanna disturb the tingles of pleasure your writing has set coursing through me!

Loved your descriptions, and recognised both Dean and Sam really well. Because I'm a Dean-girl I'd add that for me, underneath all that wonderful lustful intensity is a frightened heart that could love as sweetly, gently and sensually as Sam were circumstances different.

In summary, beautiful erotic and sensitively written. Thank you. Birdie x

This is the kind of fic that just makes you giggle like a silly little school girl. I personally thing that you hit both guys on the nail. OF course the question is which one?

Me: Sam(lol)

Lighthousewatcher

WOW!! This is simply beautiful. Both poetic and erotic. The images captured perfectly in the mind. Thank you for a truly great piece of art.

it was good

Whoa. That was really good... Man! Nice work!

Wow, just wow! This story was incredibly descriptive and visual. I haven't found anything like it on here. Thanks so much for posting. Now I have happy things to think about at work tomorrow.

What an awesome introspective view into both boys. To say that you understand the characters doesn't do this story any justice. You are the characters, and it shows.

This is perfect. Absolutely perfect.

~Sporks

Very very clever. This is the kind of fic you read carefully and savor each word. The kind of fic where you might stop in the middle to ponder some things a bit, then slowly move on to the next line. Then you smile as you reach the word (end), your eyes light up in appreciation and you wish that there were more fics like this, and authors like this one, and that you were the author. ^_^
Beautiful piece.

Just read this, and...for lack of a better word it was beautiful. I loved the way you described their contrasting traits. The words flow really well, it was like poetry. Man, this was beautifully written, one of the best things I have ever read.

Wow! Seriously amazing and intense!

Your story is so beautiful. The descriptions of Dean and Sam's personalities was dead-on and I like that you did it not through telling but showing it via the relationship they have with someone. I like that neither description was biased towards one of the characters and I liked the style that you wrote it in it. It was like liquid, flowing and very sexual without ever being so.

I loved it.

Wow, this is probably one of the best Supernatural fanfics that I've read in a long time. You did such a great job at capturing and detailing who Sam and Dean are. You wrote and compared them beautifully. Words cannot describe how good this story genuinly is. Good work!

Ally

Very interesting. You captured their characters well.

What can I say other than brilliant? I loved it!