 Mask of Ice 2009-10-25 . chapter 6OMG! Rudy! wow @_@...oh yeah, I found this story, while searching for Egoshipping fics, it's pretty good!! I like it, and I just had to review this chapter, once I found out Misty's friend was Rudy, I'm gonna keep reading, I'll also get to Anything For Love tomorrow...
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~Mask of Ice~ |
 Doki-Saku 2009-09-19 . chapter 38 As you recommended and I read it all. I have to say I only began to really get into it around chapter 18 but when the hole mess with Rudy happened. It became frustrating for me to read. (To many misunderstandings XD kinda got to my nerve) Then again I did read them all in a row, so it might just be my cranky brain~
I like the playful and strong personality you portrayed for Gary and Misty here but if I had to pick favorites.
I must say Anything For Love. Is more like my cup of tea, from Gary's sense of humor there to the interaction between him and Misty.
On this fanfic, although the story was nice and entertaining (the basic plot) at times it became to slow but it DID feel like a soap opera (took to many chappy's to solve an issue) that frustrated my skull. But that's just me. So I'm guessing it's more of that kind of genre and that might be why I was a little lolz by it.
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Now, things that got me going on. (Although I must admit at parts I skipped through/scroll down because as I said to slow for my liking) I must say, Ash was my favorite character on this one. You made him an exceptional physiologist/messenger/neutral friend of all the conflicts between Gary and Misty, especially when it began to get out of control.
Although Gary was a perverted humorous case I can't say I thought he was as snappy as he really well is with his combacks. But I know that was you creating his image as the playboy and that being the trademark.
I found the Ash and Gary horsing around as a gay couple to amuse Misty HILARIOUS. LOLZ!! So a plus for that.
We can discuss further at DA if you wish. :) But right now I'm tired. So I will just comment with this little bit of information. FOR NOW. XD I will bug you~
P.S.: I might not be peculiarly fun of this one. But I must dammit you did an excellent job with the theme you tried and gave your shot to portray. Especially with the mixture of RL with Modern facts. Twisting a few realistic facts with the fantasy that is reality in the Pokemon World you created. |
 Anon 2009-09-03 . chapter 38 i completely have fallen in love with your story, it was totally and amazing so thankyou for being the amazing writer you are, it was amazing i cant express enough how cool this was, the ending was great so again thanks for being an amazing writer |
 Mei Fire 2009-08-16 . chapter 1Well...geez, what should I say? I actually went through the trouble to read EVERY chapter from summary to end. And BOY even though my brain is about to EXPLODE from everything I've read it was very well worth it, all the way to the end. I'd like to say you're pretty much a talented writer, and an awesome one to boot! Ahh, this headache is well worth it! <3 'Grats on a job well done on this story! |
 Esmmy 2009-06-17 . chapter 6 omg like my bro's name is rudy! i can't wait to see what happend next! |
 Cavetta 2009-04-28 . chapter 26OMG so much drama in this chapter espically the cliffhanger and just to tell you not to be mean Marie's name is spelt Mahri |
 KRZR24 2009-04-25 . chapter 38That was so amazing! I loved this story throughout the whole thing! Great job! |
 Cavetta 2009-04-18 . chapter 21Very evil cliffhanger but good chappie ! |
 Cavetta 2009-04-18 . chapter 18Well i kinda know where this story is going to end up but anyways its just a thought well anyway your story is comin along great as always haha ! |
 Cavetta 2009-04-17 . chapter 15well the story is good woot-woot haha ! well anyways i have been seeing misspelled words and sentences that really make sense but it is very easy to make sense of them thankfully but anyways great job! |
 Cavetta 2009-04-17 . chapter 14Well all i can say is great job and thanks for keeping the chapters long ! |
 Cavetta 2009-04-15 . chapter 4Just like you said Woot-woot this story is awesome ! Great job! |
 SailorSapphire 2009-03-30 . chapter 2Hahah, can i just say as soon as i read this line, 'Wow Gary, you're so much better at pleasing me than my boyfriend', i knew i was gonna like this fic and so far i am loving it.
seriously i haven't laughed that hard for ages!
awesome, can't wait to read more! |
 JC-zala 2009-03-17 . chapter 38I'm a little sad that it's the end, but I am totally impressed with your story. I'm really picky when it comes to stories and I must say that yours really caught my attention. And I must thank you because you made me more interested in EgoShipping and I'm now wishing it would happen in the series.
"I want you to want me" may be your typical handsome playboy falls for beautiful yet serious girl kind of story, but it's because of the background and awesome character development that makes this story unique and interesting. There were out of character moments, but they really didn't bother me. I love how the events were played out and the bonds of friendship that character showed here. |
 JC-zala 2009-03-14 . chapter 25I've been like reading this story from chapter 1 since morning. I must say that this story kept me glued to my seat. It's so interesting, not to mention thrilling and oh-so-wonderful. I am totally into egoshipping now because of your story. Every chapter just gets me pumped up, and I'm so rooting for Gary and Misty now. You're like one awesome writer. |