This was a good story. It had a very original plot byt you stayed true to the characters and their roles in the series. Great job and keep up the good work.

Oh no! Hurry Gorobei you need to find Heihachi!

Aw, how sweet. I can't wait to see how this story turns out.

*squeals* SO CUTE! HEI-SAN IS A LITTLE BOY! HOW ADORABLE! XD (yes, I am a Hei-san nut XP )

Aww, how cute! - Explains a lot! I LOVE HEI-KUN!

Anyways, your fanfics rock!

Nicely done :-) I love how you fleshed out the interactions between the two. I *love* Gorobei - he is the S7 character I want to glomp the most! It's hard to find a Gorobei fic, not to mention a well-written one.

And they can't remember! Too bad (tears). Oh well, life does that to ya. Lookin' foward to the fics ahead!

*waves her hand* No thanks needed... I find what I like, and when I like it, I tell the person who wrote it! Anything else just isn't fair, you know?

I really do like how you handled the whole thing, bringing in little hints here and there of things that happen later in the series.

Great job!

Heh. I'm reviewing on the first page but I've read the whole thing already so no worried. . This is really cute but also really sad. No, really. It's really sad. o_o I wanna draw 'lil Hei and Goro together now. XD

Yikes! I gotta go read your other stories. *bows* :D

Yea, this is really torture. Sheesh, do you really think I'd read it if I didn't enjoy it? Well, I wonder how long it took them to remember?

update!I think i saw the fanart that inspired this was cute )

It's starting to look like he's already got a kid. It's a good thing he can handle it. He can handle it, can't he?...

Hmm, why do I read your stories? They are well thought out, well written good stories and I love your characterisations.

As to this chapter, being the mother of two, I am reminded of a 20 something year old zan (ooh! some years ago now! _ who said ' “I like kids, but I’m not getting kids of my own,” ... “Too much trouble…” '. So it really made me smile. A lot. Thank you.

Well you set it up nicely for your next chapter, really only ONE more? Looking forward to it. Well I suppose I can always look forward to you next fic for afters. _

much love

zan

ps - thanks for the link. it was a very cute 'n' sweet pic.

My first thought while reading this chapter was Heihachi and Gorobei's discussion in the Shikimoribito's caverns after Kikuchiyo gets captured...

Heihachi: "Does anyone else feel like Kikuchiyo's turning out to be more trouble than he's worth?"

Gorobei: "It's starting to feel like we're cleaning up after a teenager."

Heihachi: "More like a toddler."

And here's Heihachi getting in trouble! Hope he's okay...

Keep going!

Michelle

aka

Samuraiko

Heh, funny and sentimental at the same time. Loved the bit where Gorobei's all, "I'm NOT getting my own kids!" Bet he's going to end up saying that a lot.

Keep going!