AGH!

Shall the story remain unfinished!?!?

I so want to know what happens next!

Are you going to finish? Please please do!!

Plz do update.. i love ur story..
update soon kay?

clvr1812xoxo

are you ever going to update? i admit that while the story isn't that good(about a 3 out of 5), it is a little interesting. the writing style seemed a little monotone. update soon?

I love it! write soon please! :)

Please keep writing.
The only issue that I have of this fic is that Elizabeth seems to talk quite a lot more than I remember her talking within the text.

But please keep writing - I would like to know how you resolve this!

Update soon please. I love how you write.. it has a ring of truth.

Lady Mage

this is good

one thing though thats annoying me is this...it is showed not shewed

Poor Kitty...:(

More, more, please write more! To bring back Mr. Collins was a hoot, I just loved it. I loved even better Darcy's handling of him. Though Kitty's refusal seemed similar to Lizzy, but I guess it's due to her influence and nothing more. But through your writing I am now a fan of Kitty. She's showing a stronger strength of character and substance that is a delight to read. Poor Kitty, to read Wyeth's letter after all what happened, it's so heartbreaking! Please let there be a hint of silver lining somewhere! Thanks for the update!

I really love thos fanfic. You've done a great job and I'm looking forward to read the next chapter.
Love from France

I love this fanfic. But there's a little mistake: Lady Fondulack is that good old Miss Bingley, isn't she? In this case, she surely knows Kitty and Mary 'cause she has meet them several times when she lived in Netherfield, and of course, she saw them at the wedding of Jane and Charles Bingley. Mrs Fondulack is a "sister" to Kitty, so she does know them.

Oh... Darcy takes affair! I wonder what he wish to say!

Charlotte's dead! Poor, poor Charlotte. She didn't even get to have an affair with Colonel Fitzwilliam here, LOL! Good for Kitty to turn Collins down, and good for Darcy to throw him out!

I do wonder what Darcy will say to her though.

I loved that story! You're such a gifted writer. Your style is very similar to Jane Austen's and I enjoyed every minute of your story. Please continue it soon!