kya! kawaii, kawaii! *sob sob* kawaii!

so sad! but also cute. I can see what you're saying about it lacking depth. I mean, it doesn't, at all. but it's easier to figure out, more forward, than your other stories. 'lacking depth' just isn't the right phrase. Maybe.. 'sweet and simple'. hai. thats it.

Nice job on this one, I must say. very nice job.

I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE! Your endings are admirable to me ^.^... Lots of people can write well, but once they get to the ending it just plain sucks... But you, you're not one of those lots

HWEE! Angsty, adorable and bittersweet. I hope this continues! I like your work!

love it. LOVE.