I thought the story flow was beautiful, but there were misspelled words ("where" instead of "were" was the main one). Hooray IchiHime! Keep up the good work!

Nice and really cute
But i don't really get the whole perfect/imperfect reasoning... Even following the text, they're pretty much in the same bag to me... ^^

These oneshots are absolutely gorgeous. I love them! :D

Oh, what another spectacular IchiHime moment! In this chap., are you reffering to ep. 115 (of the anime)? I think you have a gift for writting really good Ichigo and Orihime stories :). I would love to see more of them on this site!

pleaasse update this is so freakinn amazing!

the story is super nicE!

this is so amazing

Together they are truly the epitome of perfection.

this is so cute. i mean it's not corny like some other fics i have read. but great job

This is exactly what I felt what happened in between those chapters but it seems the Ichi/Ruki fans took it as a sign as she did't like him anymore (rather dumb, they did the same thing when chapter 167 came out.) but I think the panels in 213 and 214 showed her deep understanding of Ichigo and love that no one else has ever.

Continue writing. There may not be many reviews but this story has heart.

I remember this. I wonder what Orihime's reaction would be to Ichigo visiting the Vaizards. That would be interesting. Would she be disappointed in him? Sad once again that she couldn't help him? Good chapter. Thanks for updating. Later.

I have always liked Rukia and Ichigo as a pairing. But I also like Inoue and Ichigo. They're cute together, there is no other way to say it. There aren't enough fics with the two together. I'm grateful that you have taken the time to pair them together like this. This has been a good story so far, thanks for writing it.

Heh, I like how everything is left unsaid. Actions say more than words anyways. Nice chapter.

I like the point of view splits in this first chapter. Definitely an effective technique. The manner in which they described one another was also well done.

Wow.

This is very poetic and interesting. While Ichi/Ruki seems to be dull and totally fandom I feel Ichi/Ori is one of those rare and beautiful couplings that you don't find in anime or manga. It's weird. I don't usually look for romance in shounen manga but this pairing has been bugging me for ages...thanks for the fix :)

sincerley,

Ryan