I don't think you used "buchou" too much. I like the way you described Captain Tezuka, especially from Echizen's POV. The captain is figuratively like a lion: strong leader.

Whe a dedication- XD

Such a nice little ficlet. You're going to get me actually hooked on the pairing, darn you. >.> ...Well, not 'darn you' really - more like, "What? Another obsession? But my mind is already full of those!"

Pretty amusing observations about Tezuka... Nice fic.

Kekeke *dirty thoughts* a lion Tezuka! Very deep physical and personal observation on Tezuka. A bonus since it's Echizen's. *evil laughter*

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Kyaa! It's cute. Very cute. Methinks I ought to read it, ne? :-D *hinthintpoke*

lol this was cute!! is there a chance there could be a sequel? Like Tezuka's POV, he could compare ryoma to a... ahm... cat! lol i dunno..! :P
Anywas, cool fic!!

It was cute! thanks for sharing. and the comparison is striking! Cheers.