Proper capitalization would help in this poem. The rhyme scheme was pretty good, though.

Awsome! That poem was verry well writen. Schools out^_^ It's Toatally awsome.

Col! I like it, one of the only poems I like one this entire site! (Well excrept for this one poem I read about Seto Kaiba and how he supresses(sp?) his inner child.) Update soon!

I like it. I will not flame. Nice poem. -nod- bordness is creative, isn't it?

A note from the All knowing Master of Stealth,
Kai Kitsune

that is so sad i love it please write more