|Reviews for The Plan|
| whiskedaway 11/14/11 . chapter 1
Wow, that piece of fiction was pretty intreguing. :)
| KatelySmiling 8/28/11 . chapter 1
| rajvir 1/22/11 . chapter 1
I lie this story a lot it is very intriging
| MoshiMoshiQueen 6/20/10 . chapter 1
Nice work and interesting point of view.
| BetaGuy 3/7/10 . chapter 1
| Willow-Bee the Cat 12/21/09 . chapter 1
| skepsis66 10/10/08 . chapter 1
I think it's a general consensus that Naruto's 'mask' is way too overused. Too direct and in-your-face. Your piece captures what I believe Naruto is actually like - how he thinks, how he comes up with those handy on-the-spot tactics, how every time he fights he miraculously pulls through by the skin of his teeth. It does make sense that there's something deeper to his character - I mean, 12 yrs of hatred does things to a kid. Great job on describing his situation. Especially Naruto's thoughts on Sasuke leaving. Depressing, is it not? Keep writing!
| xxguesswhoxx 4/25/08 . chapter 1
i don't get it wat's his plan and wat does this have to do with shikamaru?
| imanokie01 2/27/08 . chapter 1
I think some people are that way because if they are not they break and it would be bad for the main character to go and kill everyone. Just my thought. :)
| Aishuu 2/8/08 . chapter 1
I've seen the "smart, manipulative" Naruto idea presented several ways, but this is a gem. Short and full of punch.
| D 1/22/08 . chapter 1
Nice. It would be really great if you made this in to a longer story. I'd really like to see the end of it, and of course I'd like to read the story up to it too...
| Taisi 7/1/07 . chapter 1
-hands a shout- I'd like to know more! If it's a good book, I'll check it out. Kami-sama knows its an off day when I'm NOT at the library.
Great fic. I loved it! There aren't many fics like this, so reading one makes me all happy inside. XDD
| dreamlifter 2/20/07 . chapter 1
more than anything the clear writting style made the story good. good job!
| Tanya Lilac 1/28/07 . chapter 1
A little dark, but it's a nice character study. I like the direction you took with it- and we do see a little too many of those "Naruto's 'Mask'" Fics these days...
This was an excellent piece!
| Withering Soul 10/5/06 . chapter 1
o.o Interesting take.
It'd be curious to see a peice from Shika's perspective - if he ever suspects?