Beautiful and terrible. Loved it!

You are so amazing. Definetly made my day.

Beautiful but terrifying, an excellent portrayal of the beginnings of a pitiable insanity. I loved your word choice as well. This could almost be a missing moment if you really wished it to be, but the style is really quite different from EC and even the regular form of prose used in novels. Over all, I commend you (angst=lovely)! I love your writing, Lily.

Good work, Hermi- *cough* Lily.

I'm fairly awful at giving reviews, but I really did like it. I guess this is how I imagine insanity; I couldn't present it as well, though. - Lovely words.

Good job.

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