Beautiful poem! Going on favorites!

This is really good! I really love it, it fits very well with the film and the rhymes are very good - they're obviously not just rhymes you've pulled out of thin air just to make it rhyme (if that nakes sense lol). Anyway, good!

I'm a huge lion king fan, and that was a beautiful poem or story.



farewell from "Scuta the white warrior lion"

Very good on the relationship! I really liked it!

You must, must, must, MUST publish some poems! You're amazing! Incredible! This just pierced my soul and brought tears to my eyes. PLEASE! FANTASTIC POEM!!

beautiful!

This is beautiful!
First, it was a little irritating, but I quickly realized that the first stanza is Simba, the second stanza's Nala, the third is Simba, and so on.
Really a great poem!

ooh! how cool! TLK is one of my all-time faves! :D awesome job!

Aww! Cute poem. But who was the couple? Simba and Nala, right?

A really great poem. A very, very great poem.

I liked your poem. I thought it was beautiful.

real good! ^_^

Hmm?What is this?Simba/Nala or Kovu/Kiara?I guess it is the second one from the darkness e.t.c included.There aren't many Lion King fanfics around,but this one I really liked.

That was very good~! I cannot believe that you wrote that~!! You have great talent--keep writing and never give up your dreams~!

That is so cute! I love it! It's just so beautiful! Can I put it on my Digimon web site, Flamedramon's Fire Rocket? (It's not up yet, but I hope to get it up by the end of the week. When it's finally done the URL will be:
http://www.my.treeway.com/firerocket

^_^