 Dragon-of-Riches 2009-12-21 . chapter 4XD Demy is SO dead! BTW i love that this isn't AU. It makes it so much better. ^^ |
 SarcasticProcrastinator-AMLF 2009-08-23 . chapter 4Aw that made me want to cry!! Poor Roxy!! I could just imagine Axel leavin and Demyx portaling
out of ther and then Roxas crying xD ah my dramatic mind
--AMLF |
 animearlinefreak 2009-06-20 . chapter 9Even though this was short, this was a very cute and very interesting story. But I do feel bad for Demyx in some way because I was kind of hoping something was going to happen between him and Axel but oh well. Anyway thanks for putting up the story for us readers to read, thanks. |
 otaku-michiyo 2009-04-09 . chapter 2Yay for Demyx! Too bad Axel and Roxas are gunna kill him later... |
 otaku-michiyo 2009-04-09 . chapter 1Aww... that Demyx. He's always up to something, that cutie. |
 leohara 2008-12-05 . chapter 9 totally cute!!
I was like OMG XD
but I liked it
sadly it was the last chapter ó.ò
but it was fantastic
and marluxia still wants his revenge on demyx XD
poor demyx
anyways
it had a happy ending n_n
awesome story
I liked tha way you explained things in the whole story
probably in a future you will be a great writer
sell a lot of books
and be rich!
who knows? probably n_- |
 proser132 2008-12-05 . chapter 9WOW. That is quite literally all I'm able to say. *applause through nosebleed at lime* |
 proser132 2008-12-05 . chapter 6Okay, I don't know if you're still reading these reviews or not, but I wanted to tell you that even though i'm a total noob to this site, the little fangirl inside of me is foaming at the mouth. *falls over and dies of fandom, twitching* THANK YOU FOR THE PROMISE OF A SHOWER SCENE (even though I am more of a fangirl of Zemyx, but it's still a shower scene.) Going to read the rest and try to fill my fandom quotient of today... |
 niko-chan 2008-11-30 . chapter 9 oh.em.ge. *major fangirling*
I know it was short but...I LOVED it ^_^
i read the last little AxelRoxas part a couple times ^/^
they're my favorite pairing ever, and it think you captured their personalities very well (and Demyx I think was perfect)
thank you for writing this *high fives* |
 phillly24 2008-11-19 . chapter 9FRIGGIN AWESOMENESS FIC i liked it alot it was soo friggin hilarious, dere was not 1 chapter dat didnt hav me not readin i had to keep readin it was awesomeness, you awesome writer you lol (i seriously need too stop seyin awesome) keep up da awesome work lol :) |
 Poetoflife14 2008-09-18 . chapter 9Liked it? Oh my gosh, loved it! Especially the little bit of AKuRoku action going on. ;P Haha, I loved it when Rox turned the tables and straddled Axel. Very cute. He's makes a good uke, but I guess he can seme sometimes too, eh? ;D |
 Usagi-dorobou 2008-09-17 . chapter 9yay congrats on finishing!
lol
poor dem dem
nice way to end it lol |
 Moshi Moshi Mai 2008-08-18 . chapter 8O_O!! Wow, what a cliffhanger! XD |
 Usagi-dorobou 2008-08-15 . chapter 8wow
didn't expect that!
LOLOLOLOLOL |
 DaystoDawn 2008-08-14 . chapter 8OHMYGODINEEDMOREPLEASELETAXELENDUPWITHROXASOHCRAPOHCRAPOHCRAPOHCRAP! |