Another excellent and exciting adventure for our favourite Pegasus galaxy explorers. I know I shouldn't have, but I loved the mini-fight between Teyla and Weir and I also loved the explanation of the title - it really fits the guys' relationship well.

I love your stories, in all their McKay whumping, emotional bond building, and interestingly plotted goodness.

Wow. I can't say enough about this chapter. I read this story I while back and I loved it then. Reading it again only reaffirmed my original feelings. I think I can safely say that this is one of my favorite FanFiction moments. Thank you so much for sharing!!

Great story.

great story i enjoyed it from beginning to end

ok what does that old guy have up his sleeve ? :)

Ok, I totally didn't see that coming. The poor guys always seem to have trouble when they run into Ancients :P Outstanding story, and I can see why it got an award. I was thinking Rodney was going somewhere else with that Shepherd moon thing, since Sheppard is a bit of a stabilizing force on their team.

I'm re-reading this because it's one of my favorites fic and I'm having withdrawal sympoms that won't recide probably till the fourth season.

Anyway... I just got to this part of the conversation:

"But this isn't a space station."

"Of course it is," McKay replied, frowning. "What else could it be?"

The man stared at the scientist, his eyes narrowed. Then, oddly, he smiled.

"Okay, it's not a space station," Sheppard said slowly. "So what is it?"

The leader's ice-green eyes fixed on the colonel's, amused.

"It's a moon."

And couldn't help but to laugh XD because it reminded me of Star War's 'That is not a moon, is a space station.' quote.

Aren't the ring platforms Gou'ald technology? I know that the Gou'ald use a lot of the Ancient's devices but I always got the impression that the ring platforms weren't Ancient devices. The story is still well written. You're doing a good job on it.

That's no space station... it's a moon.

You let that go by without ONE Star Wars reference? Im... shocked. Truely shocked. And so is Rodney.

Sweet story. I read all of this all in one sitting, and I really enjoyed it. Great job!

Damn. So much for calling the wacky time travel adventure back in chapter 11.

I've been avoiding this fic for ages, because it sounded so plotty (hello 23 chapters!), which was clearly insane, because you wrote it so; instantly awesome!

I'm calling it right here! The creepy old guy is Mckay in a wacky time travle adventure!

This is an amazing story! I started reading it and coundn't stop. I loved it! Excellent work

I don't know how many times I've read this story, but this is the first time something clicked in my mind: Basically you're saying, "that's no space station. It's a moon"

You would think a former Star Wars geek like me would get the inversion there.

Again, great story, I definately love it.