It really is a refreshing change to see Zack not being all happy and going with the flow. He liked where he was. He likes where he is. But dammit, he did get hoodwinked and dropped in hot water. Of course even darling Zacky-poo is going to be a little on the outs with that. And he sleepwalks! XD

I love the tone and the way you've captured the spirit of Zack's reckless youth, all in semi-parody fairytale mode. It straddles the line between humor and action quite well. Looking forward to the rest.

I'm really enjoying your story! I hope that you continue. Zack is jst too cute when he's protective.

I'm definitely interested. I'd like to see where this goes.

Shin-ra ** list - godd ur so funni
this is really gud